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Statement grade
The average of Signal, Reasoning and Clarity. Average 70 / 100
Signal
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Thanks 1% Anecdote 25% Claims 44% Positioning 25% The ask 5%
Structure · 13 steps
Claims · 8
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 words I thank Representative Torres for her leadership. Thanks Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 30 words a graveyard of living people, is how Lorenzo described Camp East Montana, the ICE detention facility where guards denied him sunlight and fresh air for a full month.1 Lorenzo persevered. Anecdote Mr. Speaker, Claims · 23 words 52 others would never feel the sun upon their face again. Fifty-two people have died in ICE custody since Donald Trump took office.2 Positioning · 68 words They were mothers and fathers, brothers and sisters, daughters and sons, every one someone’s child. Every one a child of God. Someone loves us. Someone mourns us. When we die, grief takes part of them with us. My heart aches for the families who never got the chance to say good- bye, who never held their loved one’s hand before they died alone behind barbed wire and concrete. Positioning Claims · 70 words I have undocumented neighbors in San Jose who have lived there for more than two decades. They have built lives there. They have built families there. Some coach for youth sports teams and others volunteer at their church. Several have built businesses, employing U.S. citizens. All have built our community. This is not the first time our country has put the most ambitious of our Dreamers and doers behind bars. Anecdote · 88 words In 1942, my father came home telling my grandfather that his friend was missing from their weekly pick-up baseball game. It turned out his friend, Norm, had been taken with his family from their home on 5th Street in San Jose and incarcerated in Heart Mountain, Wyoming.3 Norm was Japanese American.4 That young boy returned to San Jose and grew up. Decades later, I had the honor of working for him as his intern. His name is Norm Mineta, and he served in this Congress for two decades.5 Anecdote Claims · 13 words The incarceration of 120,000 Japanese Americans left an indelible stain on our country.6 Positioning · 51 words The last of those who endured it still walk among us, and the ghosts of those who did not endure it still haunt our national conscience. History will harshly judge us also for the abusive and inhuman treatment of our undocumented neighbors. Unearned certainty Too many of us have declined to speak out, Positioning Claims · 101 words or perhaps only when ICE’s chaotic cruelty takes the life of an American citizen as in Minneapolis.7 Yet the deaths in our DHS detention centers continue unabated, accompanied only by the incriminating silence of the quietly complicit. I am proud that in my own Bay Area region: San Mateo County, the city of San Jose, Santa Clara County, and Napa County have all taken steps to obstruct the construction of new detention centers in our communities.8 We are helping them and others with a toolkit that includes a model ordinance, but local leaders should never have to fight this battle alone. The ask · 22 words Congress must act. Vague promise We must defend human dignity. Vague promise We must uphold our Constitution, No reason given Vague promise and we must stop digging graveyards for the living. Vague promise
At a glance
Lost points for Positioning ×10 Anecdote ×9 Vague promise ×4 Thanks Unearned certainty No reason given Little substance Much of this statement went to praise, blame, greetings, routine procedure or general stories rather than reasons, requests or specific points.
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Signal · 44
20 of 26 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I thank Representative Torres for her leadership.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “a graveyard of living people, is how Lorenzo described Camp East Montana, the ICE detention facility where guards denied him sunlight and fresh air for a full month.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “Lorenzo persevered.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “They were mothers and fathers, brothers and sisters, daughters and sons, every one someone’s child.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Every one a child of God.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Someone loves us.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Someone mourns us.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “When we die, grief takes part of them with us.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “My heart aches for the families who never got the chance to say good- bye, who never held their loved one’s hand before they died alone behind barbed wire and concrete.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “In 1942, my father came home telling my grandfather that his friend was missing from their weekly pick-up baseball game.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “It turned out his friend, Norm, had been taken with his family from their home on 5th Street in San Jose and incarcerated in Heart Mountain, Wyoming.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “Norm was Japanese American.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “That young boy returned to San Jose and grew up.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “Decades later, I had the honor of working for him as his intern.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “His name is Norm Mineta,” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “and he served in this Congress for two decades.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “The last of those who endured it still walk among us,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and the ghosts of those who did not endure it still haunt our national conscience.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “History will harshly judge us also for the abusive and inhuman treatment of our undocumented neighbors.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Too many of us have declined to speak out,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · no score
Not applicable: nothing to answer. Excluded from the average.
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue.
Reasoning · 80
1 of 26 deductions are Reasoning
Reasoning checks for sound logic and solid support for any conclusion. A low score means the speaker made unsupported leaps or used weak arguments.
No reason given A conclusion stated with no reason given for it. What the tags mean → “We must uphold our Constitution,” No clause connects the described conditions or deaths to a constitutional requirement.
Conclusions found · 5
Conclusion “History will harshly judge us also for the abusive and inhuman treatment of our undocumented neighbors.”
Because “This is not the first time our country has put the most ambitious of our Dreamers and doers behind bars.”
“The incarceration of 120,000 Japanese Americans left an indelible stain on our country.”
“and the ghosts of those who did not endure it still haunt our national conscience.”
Conclusion “Congress must act.”
Because “I am proud that in my own Bay Area region:”
“and Napa County have all taken steps to obstruct the construction of new detention centers in our communities.”
“but local leaders should never have to fight this battle alone.”
Conclusion “We must defend human dignity.”
Because “They were mothers and fathers, brothers and sisters, daughters and sons, every one someone’s child.”
“Every one a child of God.”
“My heart aches for the families who never got the chance to say good- bye, who never held their loved one’s hand before they died alone behind barbed wire and concrete.”
Conclusion “We must uphold our Constitution,”
Because No reason given
No reason given No clause connects the described conditions or deaths to a constitutional requirement.
Conclusion “and we must stop digging graveyards for the living.”
Because “a graveyard of living people, is how Lorenzo described Camp East Montana, the ICE detention facility where guards denied him sunlight and fresh air for a full month.”
“52 others would never feel the sun upon their face again.”
“Fifty-two people have died in ICE custody since Donald Trump took office.”
Respect · no score
Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Clarity · 87
5 of 26 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Unearned certainty Something stated as certain with nothing to back it. What the tags mean → “History will harshly judge us” Asserts a future historical verdict with no source or basis offered.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “Congress must act” Calls for action with no specific measure, actor, or success condition.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “We must defend human dignity” A commitment with no concrete step, date, or measure attached.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “We must uphold our Constitution” A general commitment with no specified action or condition of success.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “we must stop digging graveyards for the living” A figurative commitment with no actor, mechanism, or defined outcome.
Claims · 8
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
1 “Camp East Montana, the ICE detention facility where guards denied him sunlight and fresh air for a full month” search 2 “Fifty-two people have died in ICE custody since Donald Trump took office” search 3 “taken with his family from their home on 5th Street in San Jose and incarcerated in Heart Mountain, Wyoming” search 4 “Norm was Japanese American” search 5 “he served in this Congress for two decades” search 6 “The incarceration of 120,000 Japanese Americans” search 7 “ICE’s chaotic cruelty takes the life of an American citizen as in Minneapolis” search 8 “and Napa County have all taken steps to obstruct the construction of new detention centers in our communities.” search
