Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Christopher A. Coons

422 words · 15 sentences · 24 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Greeting 3%Anecdote 10%Procedure 8%Claims 46%Thanks 15%Promise 18%

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Mr. President, Greeting · 13 wordsI thank my colleague and friend from the truly great State of Alaska.Greeting Anecdote · 41 wordsOur mutual friend Dan Tate, long known here as an active lobbyist, who is living with ALS, has been texting the two of us about the impact that this research has had on him and his condition and on many others.Anecdote Procedure · 5 wordsHe most recently texted me: ProcedureClaims · 96 wordsThe ACT for ALS bill that we helped get passed 5 years ago and that we are now reauthorizing--I will remind you that initially, advocates were seeking $10 million.1 Do you remember the Ice Bucket Challenge of 2014?2 They were seeking $10 million in Federal medical research. This year, it was $115 million.3 In total over the years since we have passed this legislation through this Chamber, $391 million has been invested.4 There are today 1,200 people living with ALS enrolled in a landmark genetic study, 5and there have been significant steps forward in experimental treatments. Procedure · 10 wordsDr. Sabrina Paganoni of Mass General Brigham Neuroscience Institute said: ProcedureClaims · 29 wordsWe are at a turning point because we have a greater awareness of ALS, more funding for research than ever before, and more treatments in development than ever before. Procedure · 15 wordsWhen Lou Gehrig gave a speech announcing his retirement from baseball, he concluded by saying: ProcedureClaims · 32 wordsI am the luckiest guy in the world.6 Many saw that as a bitter irony because he left an outstanding career in baseball to struggle and suffer through an ultimately terminal disease. Thanks · 63 wordsBut I have to say that I am the luckiest man in the world to have the blessing of the great, enduring friendship of a colleague and partner from Alaska; of the steady and reliable and motivating input of so many advocates and cared-for people living with this dread disease; and the lifelong partnership and friendship of an amazing man, Dr. Jack Flynn.Thanks Promise · 76 wordsIn a determined effort to deliver hope and change, Senator Murkowski and I and all of us in this ALS Caucus are determined to get this bill to the President’s desk, signed into law, and to deliver another generation of medical research to get us closer to that day when no one--no one--has to face the diagnosis or live with ALS and it will be a chapter in our history, not a threat for our future.Vague promise Claims · 38 wordsBut for today in this body, I am grateful for a chance to celebrate a significant step forward, a unanimous action by this Chamber, 7and the delivery of hope to so many around our Nation and our world. Procedure · 4 wordsI yield the floor.Procedure

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