Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Lisa Murkowski

982 words · 57 sentences · 74 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
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Positioning 13%Claims 39%Procedure 6%Thanks 21%Reasoning 8%Anecdote 12%Aside 2%Promise 1%

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Mr. President, Positioning · 52 wordswe go through periods here in the U.S. Senate where there are frustrating issues that we deal with. There are hours of unknown as to what is going to happen. Are we going to be able to make something happen? Are we making a difference? And some days can be particularly discouraging.Positioning Claims · 12 wordsWe have a long way to go before this day is through, Procedure · 15 wordsbut to be here at the midpoint of this day and to be able to, ProcedureThanks · 24 wordsas my colleague and friend from Delaware has stated, to be able to celebrate an accomplishment is a reminder that we do good here.Thanks Reasoning · 19 wordsAnd we don’t do good on our own. It takes teamwork. It takes cooperation and collaboration. It takes advocacy. Positioning · 30 wordsThis is really what makes me just filled with a level of optimism and hope as we are talking about where we are at this moment for the ALS community.Positioning Claims · 68 wordsThe House passed the Accelerating Access to Critical Therapies for ALS Act.1 We call it ACT for ALS. They passed it a few weeks ago, and then the Senate was able to pass it in wrapup. Yes, that means it passed by unanimous consent here yesterday.2 We are now in the final step of reauthorizing a program that is making a real difference for people living with ALS. Reasoning · 41 wordsI think it is so important to just take a step back and say ``What does that mean?’’ because we have not found the cure, unfortunately, for ALS. This legislation is not about this magical treatment that has come to be. Claims · 27 wordsBut what we were able to do working together now 5 years ago when we passed the ACT for ALS Act, we created this pathway for individuals.3 Positioning · 6 wordsIt is kind of a roadmap.Positioning Procedure · 2 wordsWe said: ProcedureClaims · 72 wordsIf you are not eligible to participate in clinical trials to access investigational treatments, there is another way here for you. We provided some pretty important funding to NIH and to FDA to accelerate the research, to improve the data sharing, to help speed up the development of new therapies.4 But what really comes about with ACT for ALS is it gives people who are living with ALS the opportunity to try. Anecdote · 5 wordsJust let me try something.Anecdote Reasoning · 20 wordsIt might not work, but let me try because right now, the diagnosis I am living with offers no hope. Claims · 76 wordsSo this is something that gives those living with ALS some hope. This is a program that works.Unearned certainty So we passed it 5 years ago. What we have now done is a reauthorization that allows us to build on this progress that we have made to ensure that individuals that are living with ALS can continue to access these clinical trials and the programs that continue to meet the needs of the patients and the researchers. Procedure · 6 wordsSenator Coons has mentioned the advocacy.Procedure Thanks · 39 wordsThose caregivers, those who stand with and are wrapping their arms and their hearts around their loved ones who are dealing with ALS--this is about hope for them as much as those who are living with this dread disease.Thanks Procedure · 11 wordsMy friend has acknowledged the names of those he calls friends.Procedure Anecdote · 24 wordsDan Tate--I was able to receive a text message on passage of the reauthorization here saying, you know, ``Go dudes’’ or something like that.Anecdote Aside · 15 wordsI don’t know that I am a dude, but I loved the enthusiasm he had.Aside Thanks · 10 wordsBrian Wallach has been an extraordinary partner over the years.Thanks Procedure · 5 wordsYou mentioned Sandra Abrevaya. Absolutely.Procedure Thanks · 10 wordsThen there is my personal advocate, my cousin Jenny Dwyer.Thanks Anecdote · 66 wordsIt was through Jenny’s husband Pat that our family learned of ALS, as Pat lived with ALS for 8 years; 5and as a family, we came to not only understand the disease and the awful progression, but it allowed us to understand some of what families go through who live with the almost daily heartbreak as you are watching your loved one progress through this diagnosis.Anecdote Procedure · 4 wordsSo to the advocates: ProcedureThanks · 17 wordsKnow that your work matters. Know that your stories matter. Know that you have made a difference.Thanks Claims · 38 wordsSo we are pleased to be able to be at this place where we can move to finally get this reauthorization into law. We have to work things through the two bodies here and get it signed in. Promise · 8 wordsThere is more that we have to do. Claims · 19 wordsWe are working on some good things as the cochairs of the ALS Caucus--the Justice for ALS Veterans Act, Positioning · 6 wordswhich is a really good one, PositioningClaims · 41 wordsand the ALS Better Care Act. Again, these address some of the challenges that face individuals with ALS as well as their families when they are trying to access the care and access the benefits after a loved one has passed. Positioning · 17 wordsWe know that for those that are living with ALS, every day matters, every day is precious, PositioningClaims · 29 wordsand we cannot afford to lose momentum when promising therapies are being studied. I am reminded if not weekly, maybe daily sometimes that people are waiting. People are waiting, Positioning · 11 wordsand they are counting on us to show up for them.Positioning Procedure · 8 wordsSo to all those in the ALS community: ProcedureThanks · 50 wordsThank you for your advocacy. Thank you for your heart and your passion and your persistence but also your willingness to open your hearts and to share your stories so that we can also become motivated and tenacious on your behalf. I am very grateful for my friend from Delaware.Thanks Positioning · 3 wordsIt is hard, PositioningAnecdote · 18 wordsas I hear stories of your dear friend and as he goes through these stages of this disease.Anecdote Thanks · 54 wordsAnd know that even though I have not met Jack, he is in my heart as well, as well as the many, many whom we are advocating for. With that, I thank again not only Senator Coons but all Members here in the Senate that have joined us in this effort to end ALS.Thanks Procedure · 4 wordsI yield the floor.Procedure

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