Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Lisa Murkowski

315 words · 14 sentences · 24 clauses

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Thanks 15%Reasoning 16%Anecdote 42%Positioning 11%Claims 14%Procedure 1%

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Mr. President, Thanks · 22 wordsI am so honored to work alongside colleagues like my friend from Delaware, who has so much heart and so much passion.Thanks Reasoning · 51 wordsBut it is a reminder to me of how much we have to do on behalf of those who do feel that they do not have a path forward, and they look to us in Congress as they go through some of the most difficult and dark moments as families together. Anecdote · 133 wordsLike Senator Coons, I have been touched by ALS, and my family has. And, in fact, it was through my family that I came to this cause, and it is through my family that I will remain committed to this cause, until such time as we have a full treatment and a cure for this awful and dreaded disease.Vague promise It was my cousin’s sister, as I call her--it was her husband Pat, who lived with ALS for 8 years. And for 8 years, as a family, we came to understand the impact of the disease, but more than the impact, what it meant to live day by day, hoping--just hoping--that tomorrow was going to bring something that was more positive. And so after Pat left us, my cousin Jenny stayed in the fight.Anecdote Positioning · 35 wordsIt is pretty hard after you have fought alongside your spouse, and pretty hard when you have come to hate a disease so passionately, and you want to never utter those words, those letters, again.Positioning Claims · 45 wordsBut when ACT for ALS reauthorization passed last night by voice vote, I sent a text to Jenny.1 And I said: And she sent a note back, late, late last night. And I am just going to share this as my final comments. She said: Thanks · 25 wordsSo, Mr. President, thank you. Thank you for helping us realize this today on behalf of all those who live with ALS and their families.Thanks Procedure · 4 wordsI yield the floor.Procedure

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