Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Gabe Evans

464 words · 21 sentences · 27 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Greeting 8%Promise 6%Claims 56%Anecdote 9%Reasoning 4%Procedure 4%Thanks 6%Positioning 3%The ask 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 8 wordsI thank the gentleman from Kentucky for yielding.Greeting Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 30 wordsI am proud to rise today in strong support of my bill to help combat the epidemic of fentanyl deaths that have been driven by the proliferation of counterfeit pills.Greeting Promise · 29 wordsMy bill, the Stop Pills That Kill Act, is commonsense legislation that will help save American lives by cracking down on criminals who traffic poison disguised as prescription drugs.Vague promise Claims · 92 wordsUnder Republican leadership, the United States has thankfully seen a steep decline in monthly synthetic opioid deaths, driven by policies that strengthen border security and target cartels and drug dealers.1 Unfortunately, my State of Colorado has seen the exact opposite trend, with an average overdose rate of about 800 deaths per month at the end of 2024 increasing to 1,000 deaths now.2 Because Colorado’s trends have not matched the Nation and have, in fact, gone the other direction, my State has, unfortunately, seen more than 1,600 tragic and preventable excess overdose deaths.3 Anecdote · 12 wordsI was a cop in the Denver area for over a decade.4AnecdoteOff point Reasoning · 18 wordsI know that this figure isn’t just a tragic coincidence. It is a direct result of failed policies. Claims · 40 wordsWhile I was working to keep communities in Colorado safe from the poison that is fentanyl, Denver Democrats chose repeatedly to push soft-on-crime policies that lessened criminal sentencing for drug offenses while refusing to take a hard line on fentanyl. Procedure · 15 wordsThe Stop Pills That Kill Act counteracts these deadly policies by doing three simple things: ProcedureClaims · 84 wordsIt closes a sentencing loophole that allows poison peddlers off with a slap on the wrist. It implements serialization requirements for pill presses and their critical components.5 And it makes it illegal to manufacture, distribute, or import pill presses with the intent to illicitly produce a controlled substance.6 I will remind my colleagues that every 15 days under the previous administration we lost the same number of Americans to drug overdose deaths that we lost in the entirety of the September 11 terrorist attacks.7 Anecdote · 28 wordsI was a cop for 10 years, 8and I was a soldier for 12. I deployed to a combat zone as part of the global war on terror, AnecdoteOff pointProcedure · 5 wordsand that statistic speaks volumes.Procedure Claims · 44 wordsWe must remember the impacts that fentanyl has had on hundreds of thousands of American families. During the legislative process, two bills were folded into mine, the Fight Illicit Pill Presses Act, led by Representative Hageman, 9and the PRESS Act led by Representative McDowell.10 Thanks · 30 wordsI thank both of them for their work, but I want to particularly recognize my friend, Mr. McDowell, who tragically lost his own brother to fentanyl nearly 10 years ago.11Thanks Positioning · 15 wordsRepresentative McDowell’s dedication to fighting this crisis is a fitting honor to his brother’s legacy.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 14 wordsI urge my colleagues to join me in supporting this critically important, commonsense bill.

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