Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Teresa Leger Fernandez

145 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 27%Claims 44%Anecdote 24%Promise 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 21 wordsI rise to honor the life of Randy Lupe, a wildland firefighter who helped protect New Mexico during the Frijoles fire.Thanks Claims · 38 wordsA member of the San Carlos Apache Tribe, Randy came with California Complex Incident Management Team 8 as the fire threatened rural communities.1 He spent 10 days supporting the response, carrying with him nearly 30 years of experience.2 Anecdote · 35 wordsRandy brought laughter to long assignments and faith to difficult moments. He prayed with his crew, lifted their spirits, stood up for his fellow firefighters, and lived by a simple creed: Do what is right.Anecdote Claims · 26 wordsTragically, Randy died as a result of a medical emergency while serving our communities.3 He is one of 61 firefighters we have lost this fire season.4 Thanks · 18 wordsNorthern New Mexico mourns Randy and honors his sacrifice. He answered the call when we needed him most.Thanks Promise · 7 wordsWe will remember him as a hero.

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