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Pat Harrigan

238 words · 19 sentences · 22 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 7%Positioning 13%Claims 42%Anecdote 12%Reasoning 15%The ask 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 31 wordswhat does it say about our priorities if North Carolina has the land to train our soldiers for war but not the space to care for them when they grow old?Positioning Claims · 82 wordsThat is the problem H.R. 10159 helps solve, and it is why I am proud to cosponsor this bill. North Carolina is home to more than 600,000 veterans, 1but today the 150-bed Fayetteville State Veterans Home is closed after serious structural problems forced every resident out.2 The building has closed. The need that it served has not changed. Just a few miles away at Fort Bragg, there are approximately 20 acres that can give that new home a place to be built.3 Anecdote · 29 wordsI know Fort Bragg well. I trained there as a Green Beret and deployed from there to Afghanistan.4 The men I served alongside are veterans now. So am I.Anecdote Claims · 8 wordsThe 20-year-old soldier eventually becomes the 70-year-old veteran. Reasoning · 15 wordsThe country that needed him at 20 still has a responsibility to him at 70. Claims · 9 wordsFort Bragg has spent generations preparing Americans for service. Reasoning · 21 wordsNow, we have an opportunity to use a small part of it to care for them after that service is over. The ask · 27 wordsGive North Carolina the land. Let us build the home, and let us take care of the people who spent their lives taking care of our country. Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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