A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 69%Reasoning 12%Positioning 8%Thanks 11%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 95 wordsI rise today to recognize Dennis Webb, who is retiring after nearly 20 years of covering the environment and natural resources for the Grand Junction Daily Sentinel.1Out West, public lands are not an abstraction.They shape how people work, ranch, hunt, and live.Dennis helped the people of the Western Slope understand the policies that shaped those lands, from water rights to grazing to wildfires and wildlife management.His reporting earned the respect not only of readers across western Colorado but of legislators and officials in Denver as well as here in Washington, D.C.Reasoning · 20 wordsGood journalism doesn’t tell people what to think.It helps them understand the issues well enough to think for themselves.Positioning · 13 wordsDennis did that with clarity, fairness, and a deep understanding of the West.PositioningClaims · 22 wordsThoughtful local journalism is increasingly rare, and western Colorado is better because Dennis Webb devoted his career to getting the story right.Thanks · 19 wordsI wish Dennis a well-earned retirement, and I thank him for his service to readers on the Western Slope.Thanks