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John J. McGuire III

151 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Anecdote 9%Claims 84%Positioning 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 13 wordsimagine riding 40 miles through dark Virginia woods to save the American Revolution.Anecdote Claims · 50 wordsIn June 1781, militia Captain Jack Jouett did just that, galloping from Louisa County in the Fifth District to Monticello, also in the Fifth District, to warn Governor Thomas Jefferson of an impending British capture.1 Jouett’s warning saved Jefferson and the general assembly in Charlottesville, preserving our young Nation’s leadership.2 Positioning · 11 wordsThese heroes are deeply tied to Virginia’s historic Fifth Congressional District, PositioningClaims · 77 wordswhich still includes Albemarle and Louisa County today. In 1789, the Fifth District hosted a legendary race: James Madison, the father of the Constitution, campaigned against his friend and neighbor, James Monroe, the Revolutionary War veteran who was the father of the Monroe Doctrine.3 Madison won, becoming Virginia Fifth District’s very first Representative.4 From Jack Jouett’s courage to the vision of three Presidents, the legacy of American liberty was forged right here in Virginia’s Fifth Congressional District.

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