The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity. Reasoning rests on 2 conclusions, too few to hold the grade down.
Average 95 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 57%Positioning 5%Reasoning 35%Procedure 3%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Chair, Claims · 68 wordsthis amendment does not end all assistance.It only strengthens the conditions and encourages the Nigerian Government to meet them.Why should we give 50 percent of the money when the Nigerian Government has not met the criteria established in the underlying bill?2We are approaching $40 trillion in debt.1Off pointWhy are we sending funds to corrupt countries overseas that are unwilling to fully address violence and persecution?Positioning · 10 wordsThe generosity of the American taxpayer should reflect American values.PositioningReasoning · 71 wordsWe can’t be putting ourselves more into debt to countries that are unwilling to uphold our values.The U.S. should not borrow money to subsidize foreign governments that fail to protect innocent civilians.If the aid conditions included in the bill are important enough to withhold half of the funding to the Nigerian Government, then they are important enough to withhold all of the funding until the underlying conditions are met.Claims · 48 wordsThe Nigerian Government continues to fail to address violence in their country.Why should they still be eligible for funding given their lackluster response to the violence?Christian women and girls continue to be abducted, assaulted, tortured, and killed.Their churches are burned, and entire communities are erased.Madam Chair, Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure