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Lois Frankel

189 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
D
48 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 22%Positioning 4%Anecdote 6%Promise 10%Procedure 9%Claims 30%The ask 19%

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Madam Chair, Reasoning · 21 wordsthere is no question that going forward there needs to be a thoughtful conversation how we spend our foreign aid money.Vague promise Positioning · 8 wordsI know we are all committed to that.PositioningUnearned certainty Anecdote · 11 wordsMy heart breaks for the suffering of innocent people in Gaza.Anecdote Promise · 19 wordsWe must find a way to infuse humanitarian support, how to find a peaceful coexistence between Israelis and Palestinians, Vague promiseProcedure · 9 wordsbut let me tell you how we got here.Procedure Claims · 56 wordsSince 1979, Iran has repeatedly called for Israel’s elimination while arming terrorist proxies.1 In the past 3 years, those proxies have launched more than 30,000 rockets, missiles, drones, 2and mortars into Israel while Hamas hid in their billion dollars’ worth of building of tunnels, 450 miles of tunnels, beneath civilian areas to wage war, not peace.34 Reasoning · 9 wordsThis is not a way to handle foreign policy. The ask · 16 wordsI join all rational people who say let’s have a deliberate conversation how to move forward, Reasoning · 12 wordsbut not with a 10-minute debate on the floor of the House. The ask · 20 wordsLet’s have our efforts aimed together to a two-state solution where Palestinians and Israelis can live peacefully and prosperously together.Off point Madam Chair, Procedure · 8 wordsI yield back the balance of my time.Procedure

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