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Brad Sherman

410 words · 21 sentences · 26 clauses

Statement grade
B+
80 / 100, held down by Reasoning
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 69%Reasoning 5%Procedure 5%The question 5%The ask 7%Promise 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Chair, Claims · 26 wordsPresident Obama signed a 10-year memorandum of understanding.1 We are now in the ninth year of that memorandum.2 Mr. Massie would have us repudiate that signature. Reasoning · 22 wordsThat is as bad an idea as Donald Trump’s repudiation of the JCPOA, the deal with Iran that limited its nuclear program.3 Procedure · 9 wordsWe are told that this is about offensive weapons.Procedure Claims · 30 wordsThis $3.3 billion provides the AMRAAM system that defends Israeli apartment buildings and houses from incoming missiles that have as one purpose: 4to kill as many Israeli civilians as possible. The question · 15 wordsHow are we going to influence the people of Israel and the government of Israel? Claims · 10 wordsThey need our influence. They need to change their policies. The question · 7 wordsHow are we going to influence them? Claims · 129 wordsAs the missiles are coming in for the sole purpose of killing as many civilians as possible, we say we will not help shoot them down. We will not fund the AMRAAM system that is provided for in a memorandum of understanding signed by President Obama. This amendment is a political stunt. Republican leadership has brought it to the floor--not for the purpose of having it become law, Logical leapbut for the purpose of driving a wedge through the middle of the Democratic Party, for the purpose of facilitating Republican advertisements that will put our party on the side of those who are screaming death to America and death to Israel, Straw manand to put our party on the side of those who say that Israel has no right to exist.Off point The ask · 30 wordsIf you care about not only our Middle East policy but you care about the Democratic Party’s position, with the American people, then you must vote ``no’’ on this amendment. Promise · 30 wordsNow that does not mean that there will not be future reductions in our aid to Israel. That does not mean that we will not try to change Israeli policy, Claims · 41 wordsbut this amendment goes as far as it possibly can to put us on the side not of those who would shoot down the missiles that are aimed at civilian neighborhoods in Israel but on those who are cheering those missiles. Procedure · 13 wordsThen we are told that the amount of money involved is the focus.Procedure Claims · 48 wordsIt says $3.3 billion, 5but that is about an 80th of the aid that we have provided Ukraine and that we should have provided Ukraine.6 This is not an attempt to divert a large portion of our money from Israel.False choice This is an attack on the Israeli people.

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