Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Lois Frankel

201 words · 12 sentences · 19 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 15%Claims 28%Positioning 15%Reasoning 38%The ask 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chairman, Procedure · 10 wordsI yield myself the balance of my time to close.Procedure Claims · 35 wordsSadly, this bill arrives at a time when the Trump administration has chosen to put us into a war that is costing our country billions of dollars and countless lives, with no end in sight. Procedure · 12 wordsI hope I am wrong, but that is what it looks like.ProcedureOff point Positioning · 24 wordsThis bill should be a moment to strengthen America and show the world that American leadership is more than bombs, bullying, and illegal tariffs.PositioningOff point Reasoning · 13 wordsDone right, it could make our Nation more secure, at home and abroad. Positioning · 6 wordsInstead, it is falling painfully short.PositioningNo reason given Claims · 10 wordsA strong America requires both hard power and soft power, Reasoning · 44 wordsbecause military strength alone cannot prevent every conflict, stop every pandemic, build every alliance, or open every new market for American workers. When America leads with diplomacy, development, and humanitarian leadership, we make our Nation stronger and safer. When America retreats, our adversaries advance.Off pointLogical leap Claims · 12 wordsThis bill retreats from American leadership, and it makes America less secure. Mr. Chairman, Reasoning · 19 wordsI hope and I expect that we can still improve this legislation as it moves through the legislative process.Vague promise The ask · 7 wordsUntil then, I urge a ``no’’ vote, Procedure · 9 wordsand I yield back the balance of my time.Procedure

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