Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Gabe Amo

309 words · 21 sentences · 24 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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Procedure 8%Positioning 8%Claims 45%Reasoning 19%Promise 21%

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Mr. Chair, Procedure · 7 wordsI rise in opposition to H.R. 8595.Procedure Positioning · 11 wordsThis disastrous bill doesn’t just turn America’s back on the world.Positioning Claims · 51 wordsIt makes Americans less safe and more vulnerable to disease. An Ebola outbreak in the Democratic Republic of the Congo and Uganda has taken more than 700 lives and infected more than 1,900 people.1 American citizens have already been infected, 2and the outbreak will spread if we fail to contain it. Procedure · 2 wordsRepublicans’ solution?ProcedureOff point Claims · 19 wordsBan the United States from supporting the World Health Organization, the group coordinating the response to the Ebola outbreak.3Logical leap Positioning · 13 wordsThe story of outbreaks fueled by Republican shortsighted cuts does not end there.Positioning Claims · 68 wordsHere at home, we are responding to a growing cyclospora outbreak that has sickened more than 1,600 people across more than 30 States, with thousands more cases under investigation.4 Public health officials are still working to identify the source of the outbreak.5 They are facing an uphill battle thanks to Trump and Republicans’ deep cuts to the CDC’s public health workforce and the program that monitors foodborne illness. Procedure · 6 wordsThe cause and effect is clear.ProcedureLogical leapUnearned certainty Reasoning · 16 wordsWhen Republicans slash public health funding and stop monitoring the spread of disease, Americans get sick.Off pointUnearned certainty Promise · 64 wordsFor this reason, at the appropriate time, I will offer a motion to recommit this bill back to committee.6 If the House rules permitted, I would have offered the motion with an important amendment to this bill. My amendment would strike provisions that prohibit U.S. participation in international public health efforts through the World Health Organization and the pandemic prevention, preparedness, 7and response accord. Reasoning · 42 wordsDisease prevention and surveillance at home and abroad protect American families. Infectious diseases do not stop at borders. We are safest when we work with partners around the world to detect outbreaks early, share information, and respond before disease reaches our borders. Mr. Chair, Procedure · 10 wordsI include in the Record the text of my amendment.Procedure

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