The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity. Reasoning rests on 2 conclusions, too few to hold the grade down.
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 8%Claims 73%Positioning 7%Reasoning 12%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsI yield myself the balance of my time.ProcedureClaims · 32 wordsAs I conclude, I will point out that when our committee held a hearing last year, none of the majority’s witnesses said a single positive thing about this bill in their testimony.1Off pointPositioning · 14 wordsThat is probably because there is nothing positive to say about this harmful bill.PositioningClaims · 41 wordsNow, using merchant category codes for firearm retailers won’t solve this problem, not even close.The codes themselves don’t identify what is purchased, 2but it might have triggered a flag for unusual and suspicious purchases that get reported to law enforcement.Mr. Speaker, Claims · 17 wordsthat might save 1 life or 10 lives or 100 lives or 1,000 lives or 10,000 lives.Reasoning · 24 wordsEven if it is a fraction of the 416,000 who have died from gun violence over the past decade, wouldn’t it be worth it?3No reason givenMr. Speaker, Claims · 57 wordsthe audacity of the opposite side of the aisle to tell States they cannot use these merchant codes, any State in the United States of America, even those who started in some way using these codes, they are now saying they want a law that would preempt your State from being able to use the merchant codes.4Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsI yield back the balance of my time.Procedure