Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Tony Wied

150 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Greeting 35%Claims 48%Reasoning 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 31 wordsI rise today to congratulate Deacon Mike Vander Bloomen on his retirement from the parish staff at Our Lady of Lourdes Catholic Church and for his 25 years of faithful service.1Greeting Claims · 72 wordsDeacon Vander Bloomen began serving in Our Lady of Lourdes in 2001 and was ordained in 2003.2 Since then, whether visiting the elderly, offering guidance through troubling times, or using personal stories to connect with parishioners, he has supported countless people and helped strengthen their faith. Although he is retiring from the parish staff, Deacon Vander Bloomen will continue preaching and lending a hand at Our Lady of Lourdes where he can. Reasoning · 25 wordsHis willingness to continue serving speaks to his love for his faith and his dedication to the community that he has served for 25 years. Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI congratulate Deacon Mike Vander Bloomen on his many years of service and wish him all the best in his well-deserved retirement.Greeting

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