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Michael Guest

344 words · 15 sentences · 27 clauses

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Madam Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordsI rise today to honor and remember the life and legacy of John Lyle Keenan of Jasper County, Mississippi.Thanks Claims · 299 wordsMr. Keenan was a respected law enforcement officer and a devoted husband, father, grandfather, friend, and neighbor whose service and character left a lasting mark on his community. Born in Rose Hill, Mississippi, Mr. Keenan graduated from Heidelberg High School in 1964.12 He began his career at La-Z-Boy in Newton before entering public service as a deputy with the Jasper County Sheriff’s Department.3 In 1977, he joined the Mississippi Department of Wildlife, Fisheries, 4and Parks as a conservation officer, where he served with distinction for more than three decades. While serving at the Department of Wildlife, Fisheries, and Parks, he rose to the rank of captain for District IV before retiring in 2010.5 Two years later, the Jasper County Board of Supervisors appointed him as interim sheriff, 6and he concluded his law enforcement career as a bailiff for the circuit court. Mr. Keenan’s dedication to public service extended well beyond his official duties. He was deeply committed to the stewardship of Mississippi’s natural resources, and he served as Jasper County director of the Pat Harrison Waterway District.7 He also held leadership roles as president of the Jasper County Farm Bureau, the Jasper County Soil and Water Commission, the Meridian Stockyard board of directors, 8and the Mississippi Pork Producers Association. He remained active in numerous civic and agricultural organizations, including the Jasper County Forestry Association, the Jasper County Livestock Association, and the Bay Springs Lions Club. Mr. Keenan was widely regarded as a man of honor and integrity, and many sought his counsel on both personal and professional matters, a testament to the trust he earned throughout his life. He was a faithful member of Wesley Independent Methodist Church, 9where he lived out the values that guided his service. Mr. Keenan will be deeply missed, not only by his family, Thanks · 26 wordsbut by the entire Jasper County community. It is a privilege to recognize his life, his service, and his enduring commitment to the people of Mississippi.Thanks

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