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Juan Ciscomani

Republican on Congratulating Tanque Verde High School Softball Team 2026-07-14

187 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade

B+

Average 80 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Greeting 24%Claims 62%Thanks 8%Positioning 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 21 wordsI rise today to congratulate the Canyon del Oro High School softball team on winning the 2026 5A State championship title.¹Greeting Claims · 116 wordsAfter three runner-up finishes in the past five seasons, the Dorados came out on top this year with a score of 4-3 in the championship game, finishing the season 29-6.²³ This victory marks the team’s first State title since 2017.⁴ It is also Coach Kelly Fowler’s third title since starting at CDO.⁵ During the game, junior first baseman Emma Shaffer scored a three-run home run at the top of the first inning, putting the Dorados up 3-0 early in the game.⁶ The game was tied up 3-3 for a short time, but the tie was broken after Shaffer forced a walk to load the bases and freshman second baseman Brooklyn Benavides moved the score to 4-3.⁷ Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI congratulate Coach Kelly Fowler, the whole team, and everyone who made this win possible.Thanks Positioning · 12 wordsTheir hard work has made their school and our community very proud.Positioning Greeting · 23 wordsI know the Dorados will enjoy their victory. They have earned it, and here is to another successful season and many, many more.Greeting

At a glance

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What the tags mean

Signal · 60

7 of 7 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Greetings and pleasantries.What the tags mean “I rise today to congratulate the Canyon del Oro High School softball team on winning the 2026 5A State championship title.”A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “I congratulate Coach Kelly Fowler, the whole team,”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks and tributes.What the tags mean “and everyone who made this win possible.”Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “Their hard work has made their school and our community very proud.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Greetings and pleasantries.What the tags mean “I know the Dorados will enjoy their victory.”A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Greetings and pleasantries.What the tags mean “They have earned it,”A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Greetings and pleasantries.What the tags mean “and here is to another successful season and many, many more.”A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · no score

Not applicable: nothing to answer. Excluded from the average.

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue.

Respect · no score

Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Clarity · 100

0 of 7 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Nothing lost points.

Claims · 7

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“Canyon del Oro High School softball team on winning the 2026 5A State championship title”Canyon del Oro High School’s softball team won the 2026 Arizona 5A State championship title.search
2“three runner-up finishes in the past five seasons”Canyon del Oro High School’s softball team had three runner-up finishes in the past five seasons.search
3“a score of 4-3 in the championship game, finishing the season 29-6”Canyon del Oro won the 2026 5A softball championship game 4-3 and finished the season with a 29-6 record.search
4“the team’s first State title since 2017”Canyon del Oro High School’s softball team had not won a State title since 2017 before the 2026 championship.search
5“Coach Kelly Fowler’s third title since starting at CDO”The 2026 title is Coach Kelly Fowler’s third championship at Canyon del Oro High School.search
6“junior first baseman Emma Shaffer scored a three-run home run at the top of the first inning, putting the Dorados up 3-0”In the championship game, junior first baseman Emma Shaffer hit a three-run home run in the top of the first inning to put Canyon del Oro up 3-0.search
7“the tie was broken after Shaffer forced a walk to load the bases and freshman second baseman Brooklyn Benavides moved the score to 4-3”In the championship game, Emma Shaffer drew a bases-loading walk and freshman Brooklyn Benavides drove in the go-ahead run to make the score 4-3.search

Analyzed on 2026-09-15