Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Juan Ciscomani

182 words · 12 sentences · 15 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 10%Claims 59%Positioning 22%Thanks 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 19 wordsI rise today to congratulate Tanque Verde High School softball team on winning the 2026 3A State championship title.1Greeting Claims · 108 wordsThe Hawks earned the title by defeating Yuma Catholic by a 10-0 score.2 This victory marks the team’s first-ever championship, an accomplishment that is exciting and worth celebrating.3 During the championship game, Tanque Verde added their first run on the board in the third inning, before adding six runs in the fourth, one in the fifth, 4and two more in the sixth.5 Junior pitcher Claire Achilles was named the Class 3A MVP after pitching six innings, allowing a hit and recording 13 strikeouts.6 Additionally, sophomores Mikaela Jackson and Ella Haggard each had three hits during the game.7 The Hawks gave all they had and came out on top. Positioning · 6 wordsI am so proud of them.Positioning Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI congratulate Coach Mark Stevens, the whole team, and everyone who made this win possible.Thanks Positioning · 34 wordsTheir hard work has made their school and our community proud. I know the Hawks will enjoy their victory. They have earned it, and here is to another successful season and many, many more.Positioning

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