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Mariannette Miller-Meeks

236 words · 18 sentences · 23 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Positioning 13%Claims 55%Anecdote 7%Promise 9%Thanks 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 16 wordsI rise today for the Iowa families who have been priced out of the American Dream.Positioning Claims · 16 wordsAcross this country, the average first-time home buyer is now 40 years old, an all-time high.1 Anecdote · 17 wordsIn contrast, I purchased my first home as a young captain in the Army at age 22.Anecdote Claims · 23 wordsOur Nation is short as many as 5.5 million homes.2 The share of first- time home buyers has fallen by one-half since 2007.3 Positioning · 7 wordsIowa families feel this every single day.Positioning Claims · 91 wordsYoung couples work hard, save diligently, and still cannot afford a home in the communities they grew up in. Rental prices have increased, 4as well. The 21st Century ROAD to Housing Act changes that. It cuts the red tape strangling home construction, so we build more homes and lower costs for buyers and renters alike. It stops big Wall Street firms from buying up single-family homes because Iowa homes belong to Iowa families, not hedge funds.5 This is the most significant housing reform in a generation, and it is now law.6 Promise · 12 wordsTo every Iowan chasing their first home, help is on the way.Vague promise Positioning · 7 wordsThe American Dream is worth fighting for, PositioningPromise · 9 wordsand I will never stop fighting for my constituents. Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordsI would like to extend a birthday greeting to the oldest of seven siblings, Richard Miller.7 Happy birthday, Richard.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordsI would like to extend birthday greetings to the youngest of my seven siblings, MariEleanor Martino.8 Happy birthday, MariEleanor.Thanks

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