A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 14%Claims 79%Anecdote 7%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 25 wordsI rise today to congratulate the Pella High School Marching Dutch on their trip to our Nation’s Capital for the 250th National Independence Day celebration.1GreetingClaims · 42 wordsLed by 21-year band director Dameon Place, the Pella Marching Dutch includes 225 talented high school students.23Participation in the band gives students the opportunity to develop leadership, discipline, teamwork, and a commitment to excellence that will serve them well after graduation.Unearned certaintyAnecdote · 12 wordsI know this firsthand because my children participated in band and orchestra.AnecdoteClaims · 98 wordsWhile the Independence Day Parade was, unfortunately, canceled because of the extreme heat, the students made the most of their once- in-a-lifetime trip.4They adapted and played a special popup performance at the Upper Senate Park, allowing visitors to experience this talented Iowa band.5They also attended the National Symphony Orchestra’s Fourth of July concert and fireworks, visited our Nation’s iconic monuments, 6and explored the Smithsonian museums.Our community in Pella is extremely supportive of its band program.These students work hard, represent Iowa with pride, and demonstrate the positive impact school music programs have on our youth.