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The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity is 82. The grade is held to 80, 30 above Signal.
80 / 100, held down by Signal
Signal
50 / 100
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Relevance
93 / 100
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Reasoning
83 / 100
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Respect
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Clarity
100 / 100
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 4% Greeting 6% Thanks 23% Claims 39% Positioning 14% Reasoning 9% Promise 4%
Structure · 20 steps
Claims · 4
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Procedure · 9 words I yield myself such time as I may consume. Procedure Madam Speaker, Greeting · 27 words I agree again with my colleague and friend Chairman Steil, this is a meaningful, bipartisan bill to ensure that the public receives important information about election-relevant communications. Greeting Thanks · 91 words I was happy to cointroduce this bill with several members of the Committee on House Administration, both Republican and Democratic. I thank Chairman Steil for his leadership and Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell for their work on this. As people may know, Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell, in particular, work hard on election administration issues as the leaders of the committee’s Elections Subcommittee. As it becomes harder to find common ground in Congress, I commend my cosponsors for their work on this and other issues important to the work at hand. Thanks Off point Claims · 75 words The bill we are considering today, the FEC Administrative Improvements Act, would amend the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 to require campaign committees to file their electioneering communications with the Federal Elections Commission in electronic format as opposed to on paper.1 As the FEC has informed Congress: ``Compared to data from paper reports, data from electronically filed reports is received, processed, 2 and disseminated more easily and efficiently, resulting in the better use of resources.’’ Procedure · 4 words I couldn’t agree more. Procedure Claims · 16 words In contrast, paper filings take days to be available to provide critical information for the public, 3 Positioning · 31 words so modernizing our campaign disclosure functions is a commonsense reform for those of us who live in the 21st century, and we are grateful we have an opportunity to do that. Positioning Claims · 42 words However, there are substantive reasons to make this change as well. The Supreme Court has long recognized that disclosure requirements are vitally important: Disclosure provides the electorate with information as to where political campaign money comes from and how it is spent. Reasoning · 18 words American voters are best equipped to choose leaders when they have the most fulsome, up-to-date information at hand. Claims · 26 words The FEC Administrative Improvements Act would also tackle another bipartisan legislative recommendation from the FEC, allowing committees to make disbursement in ways other than by check.4 Positioning · 38 words The Committee on House Administration--and I think I speak for colleagues on both sides--cares deeply about modernization. Modernizing Congress has, in recent years, driven thoughtful and bipartisan work by committee members to improve the function of this institution. Positioning Off point Claims · 30 words Our interest in modernization extends to the FEC, so H.R. 8738 will bring the FEC into the modern era and aid every American voter as they exercise their fundamental rights. Reasoning · 28 words Given the bipartisan agreement on the bill, I hope we can move it rapidly from the floor to the Senate and then to the President’s desk for signature. Logical leap Thanks · 14 words Again, I thank my colleague Chairman Steil for his courtesies and leadership on this. Thanks Off point Madam Speaker, Thanks · 9 words very simply, I thank the chairman and my colleagues. Thanks Off point Promise · 20 words I look forward to what I hope is a unanimous or near-unanimous vote in the House on this important legislation. Procedure · 8 words I yield back the balance of my time. Procedure
At a glance
Lost points for Thanks ×6 Off point ×6 Positioning ×4 Procedure ×3 Greeting Logical leap
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Signal · 50
14 of 21 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I yield myself such time as I may consume.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Greeting Greetings and pleasantries. What the tags mean → “I agree again with my colleague and friend Chairman Steil, this is a meaningful, bipartisan bill to ensure that the public receives important information about election-relevant communications.” A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I was happy to cointroduce this bill with several members of the Committee on House Administration, both Republican and Democratic.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I thank Chairman Steil for his leadership and Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell for their work on this.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “As people may know, Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell, in particular, work hard on election administration issues as the leaders of the committee’s Elections Subcommittee.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “As it becomes harder to find common ground in Congress, I commend my cosponsors for their work on this and other issues important to the work at hand.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I couldn’t agree more.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “so modernizing our campaign disclosure functions is a commonsense reform for those of us who live in the 21st century,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and we are grateful we have an opportunity to do that.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “The Committee on House Administration--and I think I speak for colleagues on both sides--cares deeply about modernization.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Modernizing Congress has, in recent years, driven thoughtful and bipartisan work by committee members to improve the function of this institution.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Again, I thank my colleague Chairman Steil for his courtesies and leadership on this.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “very simply, I thank the chairman and my colleagues.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I yield back the balance of my time.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · 93
6 of 21 deductions are Relevance
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “I thank Chairman Steil for his leadership and Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell for their work on this.” Thanks colleagues by name rather than addressing the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “As people may know, Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell, in particular, work hard on election administration issues as the leaders of the committee’s Elections Subcommittee.” Describes members’ subcommittee roles rather than the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “As it becomes harder to find common ground in Congress, I commend my cosponsors for their work on this and other issues important to the work at hand.” Commends cosponsors for bipartisanship in general terms rather than the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Modernizing Congress has, in recent years, driven thoughtful and bipartisan work by committee members to improve the function of this institution.” Speaks generally about modernizing Congress rather than the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Again, I thank my colleague Chairman Steil for his courtesies and leadership on this.” Thanks the chairman rather than addressing the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “very simply, I thank the chairman and my colleagues.” Thanks colleagues rather than addressing the bill.
Reasoning · 83
1 of 21 deductions are Reasoning
Reasoning checks for sound logic and solid support for any conclusion. A low score means the speaker made unsupported leaps or used weak arguments.
Logical leap A conclusion that does not follow from the reasons given for it. What the tags mean → “Given the bipartisan agreement on the bill, I hope we can move it rapidly from the floor to the Senate and then to the President’s desk for signature.” House bipartisan cosponsorship (c4, c5, c8) is asserted to guarantee swift Senate passage and presidential signature, which does not follow.
Conclusions found · 3
Conclusion “so modernizing our campaign disclosure functions is a commonsense reform for those of us who live in the 21st century,”
Because “The bill we are considering today, the FEC Administrative Improvements Act, would amend the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 to require campaign committees to file their electioneering communications with the Federal Elections Commission in electronic format as opposed to on paper.”
“``Compared to data from paper reports, data from electronically filed reports is received, processed,”
“and disseminated more easily and efficiently, resulting in the better use of resources.’’”
“In contrast, paper filings take days to be available to provide critical information for the public,”
Conclusion “8738 will bring the FEC into the modern era and aid every American voter as they exercise their fundamental rights.”
Because “The bill we are considering today, the FEC Administrative Improvements Act, would amend the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 to require campaign committees to file their electioneering communications with the Federal Elections Commission in electronic format as opposed to on paper.”
“``Compared to data from paper reports, data from electronically filed reports is received, processed,”
“and disseminated more easily and efficiently, resulting in the better use of resources.’’”
“Disclosure provides the electorate with information as to where political campaign money comes from and how it is spent.”
“The FEC Administrative Improvements Act would also tackle another bipartisan legislative recommendation from the FEC, allowing committees to make disbursement in ways other than by check.”
Conclusion “Given the bipartisan agreement on the bill, I hope we can move it rapidly from the floor to the Senate and then to the President’s desk for signature.”
Because “I agree again with my colleague and friend Chairman Steil, this is a meaningful, bipartisan bill to ensure that the public receives important information about election-relevant communications.”
“I was happy to cointroduce this bill with several members of the Committee on House Administration, both Republican and Democratic.”
“As it becomes harder to find common ground in Congress, I commend my cosponsors for their work on this and other issues important to the work at hand.”
Respect · no score
Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Clarity · 100
0 of 21 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Nothing lost points.
Claims · 4
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
1 “would amend the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 to require campaign committees to file their electioneering communications with the Federal Elections Commission in electronic format” The FEC Administrative Improvements Act would amend the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 to require campaign committees to file their electioneering communications with the FEC electronically rather than on paper. search
2 “``Compared to data from paper reports, data from electronically filed reports is received, processed, ” The FEC has informed Congress that electronically filed reports are received, processed, and disseminated more easily and efficiently than paper reports, resulting in better use of resources. search
3 “paper filings take days to be available” Paper FEC filings take days to become publicly available. search
4 “allowing committees to make disbursement in ways other than by check” The FEC Administrative Improvements Act would allow political committees to make disbursements by methods other than check, a recommendation the FEC made on a bipartisan basis. search