Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Joseph D. Morelle

486 words · 23 sentences · 29 clauses

Statement grade
B+
80 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 4%Greeting 6%Thanks 23%Claims 39%Positioning 14%Reasoning 9%Promise 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Madam Speaker, Greeting · 27 wordsI agree again with my colleague and friend Chairman Steil, this is a meaningful, bipartisan bill to ensure that the public receives important information about election-relevant communications.Greeting Thanks · 91 wordsI was happy to cointroduce this bill with several members of the Committee on House Administration, both Republican and Democratic. I thank Chairman Steil for his leadership and Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell for their work on this. As people may know, Congresswoman Lee and Congresswoman Sewell, in particular, work hard on election administration issues as the leaders of the committee’s Elections Subcommittee. As it becomes harder to find common ground in Congress, I commend my cosponsors for their work on this and other issues important to the work at hand.ThanksOff point Claims · 75 wordsThe bill we are considering today, the FEC Administrative Improvements Act, would amend the Federal Election Campaign Act of 1971 to require campaign committees to file their electioneering communications with the Federal Elections Commission in electronic format as opposed to on paper.1 As the FEC has informed Congress: ``Compared to data from paper reports, data from electronically filed reports is received, processed, 2and disseminated more easily and efficiently, resulting in the better use of resources.’’ Procedure · 4 wordsI couldn’t agree more.Procedure Claims · 16 wordsIn contrast, paper filings take days to be available to provide critical information for the public, 3Positioning · 31 wordsso modernizing our campaign disclosure functions is a commonsense reform for those of us who live in the 21st century, and we are grateful we have an opportunity to do that.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsHowever, there are substantive reasons to make this change as well. The Supreme Court has long recognized that disclosure requirements are vitally important: Disclosure provides the electorate with information as to where political campaign money comes from and how it is spent. Reasoning · 18 wordsAmerican voters are best equipped to choose leaders when they have the most fulsome, up-to-date information at hand. Claims · 26 wordsThe FEC Administrative Improvements Act would also tackle another bipartisan legislative recommendation from the FEC, allowing committees to make disbursement in ways other than by check.4 Positioning · 38 wordsThe Committee on House Administration--and I think I speak for colleagues on both sides--cares deeply about modernization. Modernizing Congress has, in recent years, driven thoughtful and bipartisan work by committee members to improve the function of this institution.PositioningOff point Claims · 30 wordsOur interest in modernization extends to the FEC, so H.R. 8738 will bring the FEC into the modern era and aid every American voter as they exercise their fundamental rights. Reasoning · 28 wordsGiven the bipartisan agreement on the bill, I hope we can move it rapidly from the floor to the Senate and then to the President’s desk for signature.Logical leap Thanks · 14 wordsAgain, I thank my colleague Chairman Steil for his courtesies and leadership on this.ThanksOff point Madam Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsvery simply, I thank the chairman and my colleagues.ThanksOff point Promise · 20 wordsI look forward to what I hope is a unanimous or near-unanimous vote in the House on this important legislation. Procedure · 8 wordsI yield back the balance of my time.Procedure

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