Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Joseph D. Morelle

312 words · 14 sentences · 18 clauses

Statement grade
D
47 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 5%Positioning 9%Claims 38%Promise 25%Reasoning 23%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Positioning · 22 wordsI concur with my colleague about the importance of making sure that we don’t have involvement of foreign entities into our politics.Positioning Claims · 73 wordsIf I can just opine for a minute, I do think in many ways one of the real challenges facing this country right now is a lack of faith in their government and Americans losing trust and losing faith. Part of that is because of the broad influence of money just generally in our politics. You see billionaires contributing hundreds of millions of dollars. We see the influence of dark money, of super-PACs. Promise · 69 wordsI am looking forward to over the next several months working with my colleagues, Vague promiseand over the next several years, if need be, to repair some of the damage to those relationships and let the people of this country know that the democracy which we celebrated 250 years of this month that it is in their hands, that they are ultimately the sovereigns, 1and that there weren’t outside influences. Reasoning · 40 wordsBut I think that is becoming harder and harder to be able to make that point and to convince people of that without dramatic changes in the way we finance our campaigns and the way that the public dialogue engages. Claims · 23 wordsFrankly, I am disappointed in the Supreme Court’s decision just this month related to coordination between super-PACs and party committees and individual candidates.2 Positioning · 7 wordsI think there is much to do.PositioningVague promise Reasoning · 32 wordsIf we are going to have the ability to persuade American citizens that their government is theirs, we are going to have to take out the influence of all manner of people.Off point Claims · 21 wordsCertainly, this bill is a step in the right direction. I see my colleague, the sponsor of the bill, has arrived, Promise · 9 wordsso I will certainly let him address the House. Madam Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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