Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Joseph D. Morelle

279 words · 12 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Procedure 6%Claims 58%Thanks 8%Positioning 6%The ask 22%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Madam Speaker, Claims · 138 wordsthis bipartisan bill, the Stop Foreign Funds in Elections Act, will close a loophole, as my colleague and friend, Mr. Steil, the chairman of the Committee on House Administration, has indicated, that currently allows foreign nationals to contribute to State and local ballot initiatives, 1as well as recall referenda. This change is needed because the Federal Elections Commission previously determined that the Federal Election Campaign Act’s foreign national prohibition does not actually reach ballot initiatives that do not appear to be linked to an office-seeking candidate at the Federal, State, 2or local level. The FEC often sends legislative recommendations to Congress, adopted on a bipartisan basis, to update and strengthen our campaign finance regime. This very bill has been included in their recent recommendations.3 In fact, this bill is among the highest priority legislative recommendations from the FEC.4 Thanks · 22 wordsI thank the bill’s sponsor, Congressman Fitzpatrick, as well as the bill’s co-lead, Congressman Golden, for their important work on this issue.Thanks Positioning · 17 wordsI am glad to see the House taking seriously the risk of foreign interference in domestic elections.Positioning The ask · 16 wordsIn that spirit, I encourage my colleagues to consider other comprehensive democracy reforms to close loopholes.Vague promise Claims · 18 wordsHouse Democrats’ Freedom to Vote Act, 5which includes the DISCLOSE Act, would crack down on foreign campaign spending, 6The ask · 26 wordsand I think it is well past time for Congress to do something to stem the tide of dark money, including foreign money, in American elections.Off pointVague promise Claims · 5 wordsThis bill is a start, The ask · 12 wordsand I think I would continue to urge us to do more.Vague promise Madam Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsI encourage my colleagues to support the bill, Procedure · 8 wordsand I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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