Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Lateefah Simon

153 words · 10 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 71 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 46%Positioning 14%Anecdote 31%Promise 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 22 wordsI rise in honor of Gloria Steinem, who died yesterday at her home in New York City at the age of 92.1 Positioning · 21 wordsGloria devoted each breath of her life to securing a better future for women and girls in this country and beyond.Positioning Claims · 41 wordsIn 1972, she helped to bring Ms. Magazine into the world and helped to build a movement.2 The Ms. Foundation for Women put resources directly into community organizations, led by and fighting for a more just future for women and girls.3 Anecdote · 48 wordsI know this because I came of age at that time. When I was 19 years old, working with young women surviving the underground street economy, Gloria directly supported that work and stood with us.4 She is one of the reasons that I am in this Chamber today.Anecdote Claims · 8 wordsHer family asked that we light a candle.5 Promise · 13 wordsI will. We must continue to keep her fight and that light moving.Vague promise

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