Analysis · Floor speech · beta

J. Luis Correa

117 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
C
62 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 13%Positioning 50%Claims 18%The ask 15%Thanks 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordstoday, I rise to celebrate Assemblymember Sharon Quirk-Silva’s 12-year career in the California State Assembly.12Greeting Positioning · 29 wordsThroughout her time representing north Orange County, she has led with vigor and determination and has set the standard for what it means to truly be a public servant.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsShe supported our veterans, expanded affordable housing options, and secured millions of dollars for our working families here in Orange County.3 Positioning · 30 wordsAs she marks the close of a 12-year career in the California Legislature, Sharon will be leaving a legacy of hard work, partnership, 4and accomplishment that have strengthened our communities.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 17 wordsI ask my colleagues today to join me in honoring Sharon Quirk-Silva’s lasting impact on our communities. Thanks · 5 wordsI thank Madam Quirk- Lady.Thanks

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