Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Tony Wied

183 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 12%Claims 60%Thanks 23%Procedure 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI rise today to recognize an exceptional teacher in northeastern Wisconsin who retired this summer after decades of dedicated service in education.Greeting Claims · 110 wordsMrs. Carolyn Brown began teaching at my alma mater, Notre Dame Academy, in Green Bay, in 1996, following nearly three decades in education.1 She taught English and journalism and was notably Notre Dame Academy’s first International Baccalaureate-trained teacher.2 Beyond the classroom, Mrs. Brown was known as the school’s biggest cheerleader. She could be found at games, plays, musical performances, and just about every other school event, always showing up to support her students. She also started the school’s annual Fall Fest Week and the Academy Awards talent show, giving students a chance to share their school spirit and talents while, of course, being there to cheer them along the way.3 Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 43 wordswe are so blessed to have educators such as Mrs. Carolyn Brown in northeast Wisconsin. I thank her for her many years of service to the youth of Green Bay, and I wish her the very best as she begins her much-deserved retirement.Thanks Procedure · 8 wordsRecognizing Brown County Deputy District Attorney Wendy LemkuilProcedure

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