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Juan Ciscomani

257 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
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Claims 69%Positioning 21%Greeting 4%Thanks 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 178 wordsI rise today to honor and celebrate Lisa Scott from the Vail School District earning the title of 2027 Arizona Teacher of the Year.1 Mrs. Scott, who is an eighth grade science teacher at Esmond Station K-8, has earned the highest honor among educators in being named the 2027 Arizona Teacher of the Year by the Arizona Educational Foundation.2 This esteemed award celebrates and honors educators who represent the very best of their profession by both inspiring their students and also strengthening the local community. Not only has Mrs. Scott been an amazing educator, she has done so while also navigating significant life changes that resulted from a near-death experience in December of 2022.3 The discovery of a kidney stone led to Mrs. Scott experiencing a loss of consciousness, septic shock, and treatment with a medication that restricted her limbs’ blood vessels to the point of needing to amputate both her hands and feet.4 Committed to continuing to do what she loves, even after a life- altering event, Mrs. Scott returned to the classroom in July of 2024, 5Positioning · 54 wordswhere she has proven that anything is possible when you refuse to be defined by circumstances. Being a great example to all the students that she serves and teaches, her colleagues, her administrators, but also our entire community of what grit and dedication and passion for a career like education can do for someone.Positioning Greeting · 9 wordsCongratulations to Mrs. Scott, Lisa, on this incredible achievement.Greeting Thanks · 16 wordsI thank her for the impact she has made on her students and our entire community.Thanks

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