Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Norma J. Torres

294 words · 18 sentences · 25 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 87 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 51%Anecdote 7%Aside 5%Procedure 8%Positioning 12%Reasoning 6%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 35 wordsI want you to think about what it means to dial 911. You call 911 when you are scared, when you are in danger, or when you need help and you need that help immediately. Anecdote · 22 wordsI know this because for 17\1/2\ years I was that voice on the other side, answering 911 calls, people’s calls for help.1Anecdote Aside · 14 wordsImagine, Mr. Speaker, having to make that call from inside a Federal detention center.Aside Claims · 69 wordsThat is what happened at Camp East Montana in El Paso, Texas, 2where ProPublica reviewed more than 160 emergency calls from inside the facility.3 People were calling 911 because they were sick, in pain, or desperately needed medical help from a place where the United States Government was responsible for keeping them safe but was denying them the help that they needed. Three men died in just 6 weeks.4 Procedure · 7 wordsThat is why we are here today.Procedure Claims · 20 wordsPeople like Geraldo Lunas Campos told the staff at this location that he needed help, 5and his cries were ignored.Hidden agency Positioning · 36 wordsHe is not just another statistic, and neither are the other people who have died in ICE and CBP custody. They are fathers, sons, brothers, friends, and people with families waiting for them to come home.Positioning Reasoning · 17 wordsWhen the government takes away someone else’s freedom, it takes on the responsibility for that person’s life. Mr. Speaker, Claims · 27 wordsyou cannot lock someone behind a government door, ignore their cries for help, feed them rotten food and bad water, and then act surprised when someone dies. The ask · 30 wordsThese deaths deserve answers. They deserve accountability. The families who lost someone in government custody deserve to know why their loved one died and why they did not come home. Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 17 wordsI yield to the gentleman from New Jersey (Mr. Pallone), who is soon to be Chairman Pallone.Procedure

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