Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Joseph D. Morelle

908 words · 41 sentences · 56 clauses

Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 4%Positioning 30%Claims 55%Anecdote 5%Reasoning 3%Promise 2%The ask 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 21 wordsas if we didn’t waste enough time participating in yesterday’s purely performative exercise at the Rules Committee, here we are again.PositioningOff point Claims · 27 wordsAfter zero floor activity for the last 5 weeks, House Republicans have brought to the floor a nonbinding resolution calling for enactment of the SAVE America Act.1 Anecdote · 43 wordsI was recently asked by a constituent: ``What is a nonbinding resolution?’’ And I effectively said: A nonbinding resolution is a statement of how Congress feels, but it does nothing. So here we are taking up a nonbinding resolution of how we feel.Anecdote Positioning · 64 wordsAnd in an ironic twist that would be comical if it weren’t so sinister, this resolution, this nonbinding feeling of Congress, stokes fears of a repressive totalitarian dictatorship while in the same breath affirms House Republicans’ obsession with subverting Americans’ right to vote-- the same House Republicans that have ceded entirely Congress’ constitutional authority to one single person.Off point Absurd doesn’t begin to describe this.Positioning Claims · 39 wordsThis resolution, this nonbinding resolution, asks the House to condemn government ownership of private industry, yet under Donald Trump’s administration, the Federal Government has spent almost $28 billion of American money acquiring stakes in dozens of private companies--$28 billion.2Logical leap Positioning · 29 wordsNow, personally, I believe in capitalism, but if my Republican friends want to debate socialism, they should start with the shareholder in chief who sits in the Oval Office.Positioning Mr. Speaker, Claims · 115 wordsafter hearing from their own constituents about the affordability crisis in America and the corruption in this administration for the past 5 weeks, House Republicans are wasting time on a vote for a resolution condemning a political philosophy, a resolution which has already passed the House, 3Off pointand calling for the enactment of a bill aimed at making it harder for Americans to vote--a bill which I also note has already passed this House.4 This bill would make it harder for married women and veterans to vote, a bill that would essentially gut mail and online voter registration, a bill that would force States to hand out voter rolls to President Trump’s Department of Homeland Security.5 Procedure · 14 wordsPerhaps I shouldn’t be surprised we are here today because one thing is clear: ProcedureClaims · 18 wordsAs costs are skyrocketing for American consumers, Republicans are afraid to face their constituents at the ballot box.Logical leap Positioning · 26 wordsThe White House and congressional Republicans have failed the American people, and the only remaining option is to try to keep Americans from voting at all.PositioningOff point Claims · 120 wordsThey want bills like the SAVE America Act to disrupt election administration and keep millions of eligible voters away from the polls. The President has issued illegal executive orders to block ballot access for millions of Americans, including an unlawful attempt to weaponize the United States Postal Service and eviscerate vote-by- mail regimes in States across this country because the President says mail-in voting is fraudulent, even though the President himself voted twice in the last few weeks by mail.6 This administration has defunded and gutted the Cybersecurity and Infrastructure Security Agency, CISA, 7and its support for election administrators. And of course, the President and his allies continue to actively spread mis- and disinformation about the integrity of our elections. Reasoning · 30 wordsMaybe that is the point: to cause a lack of confidence in our election writ large and get people to question the very legitimacy of our long tradition of self-governance.Off point Claims · 133 wordsHouse Democrats will continue to fight back because, despite continued efforts by the President and his allies, our elections are safe and secure.Vague promise State and local election administrators, both Democrats and Republicans, not the President, will continue to run elections in this country. States will do it. Local and State election administrators will do it, not the President of the United States. The courts will continue to reject unlawful attempts by the Department of Justice to force States to turn over their voter rolls. As of earlier this month, the Department of Justice’s record in these cases now is 0 for 23.8 There were 23 cases brought in Federal court, and the Department of Justice has lost every single one of them in their effort to force States to turn over voter rolls. Procedure · 5 wordsHouse Democrats’ objectives are straightforward.Procedure Positioning · 46 wordsEvery eligible American must have a meaningful opportunity to cast a ballot, and those ballots must be counted fairly and accurately. There is nothing more important in this moment than our collective efforts to ensure Americans are given every opportunity to render their verdict in November, PositioningPromise · 16 wordsand despite the best efforts of House Republicans, we are going to make sure that happens.Off point Mr. Speaker, Claims · 14 wordsin a recent poll, Congress was found to have a 15 percent approval rating.9Off point Mr. Speaker, Claims · 22 words15 percent of the American people approve of the job Congress is doing today. Some might understandably think that number is low, Positioning · 74 wordsbut frankly, after participating in this absurd exercise, I am surprised it is that high.Off point With all due respect to my colleagues on the other side of the aisle, would this entirely symbolic resolution Republicans are seeking to advance today do anything to lower gas prices? Would this pure messaging bill do anything to make your groceries less expensive? Would this resolution do anything to hold all the crooks in the White House accountable?Positioning Procedure · 4 wordsThe answer is simple.Procedure Positioning · 3 wordsIt would not.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsPromises were made to the American people, Hidden agencybut they have not been kept. Positioning · 7 wordsThe American people deserve better than this.PositioningOff point The ask · 9 wordsI strongly urge my colleagues to reject this resolution. Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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