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Glenn Ivey

1084 words · 57 sentences · 85 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Thanks 5%Procedure 9%Claims 17%Anecdote 33%Reasoning 20%The ask 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 59 wordsI thank the gentleman for yielding. I thank the chair, the ranking member, and all of my colleagues, as well, for the hard work and nonpartisan work, I must say, as well, that we put in, but especially the staff, who I thought did an outstanding job, yet again, in this investigation and in the report that they wrote.Thanks Procedure · 15 wordsI will speak to two different groups of people today. The first is my colleagues.Procedure Claims · 41 wordsThe second is the young women--and I will come back to this in a minute--who I had a chance to speak to a few weeks ago, in the same week that Mr. Swalwell and Mr. Gonzales had resigned from the House.1 Procedure · 9 wordsI will come back to that in a moment.Procedure Anecdote · 47 wordsMy colleagues, after they found out I was on the Ethics Committee, would frequently come up and ask me on different topics: What is over the line? What can I do to not get in trouble? How do I stay out of trouble, that sort of thing.Anecdote Procedure · 29 wordsOn these issues, this is a particular set that we have talked about on a couple of occasions, so I wanted to point out a couple of things here.Procedure Claims · 17 wordsI commend Mr. Edwards for the comments that he made and the legal document that he filed, Reasoning · 28 wordsbut one of the things it really failed to do was address the specific allegations about the gifts and how inappropriate, frankly, they obviously were on their face.Unearned certainty Claims · 58 wordsAs the report details on page 4 of the report: ``Both women received numerous gifts from Representative Edwards, including jewelry totaling over $1,000, designer purses, guns, shoes, flowers, a laptop and cell phone, KitchenAid mixer, robotic vacuum, vacations, tickets to performances, 2and one-on-one dinners.’’ The tickets to performances, that wasn’t just any performance. That was ``Hamilton’’ on Broadway.3 Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 100 wordsmy anniversary is coming up. I have been married 38 years as of Thursday, 4and my wife really wanted to go to see ``Hamilton.’’ When I took a look at what those prices were, I said: Babe, we are going to have to wait until it comes on the off-Broadway tour. He put up the money to send them there anyway, and those are the types of things, those are the types of gifts, that kind of jump out at you. This isn’t like a birthday card. This isn’t congratulations on your wedding or that new baby that was born.Anecdote Reasoning · 12 wordsThese are gifts that people, Members, should not be giving to staffers. Anecdote · 25 wordsI worked for a Congressman and three Senators as a staffer beginning back in 1987.5 We didn’t pass around gifts like this. We just didn’t.Anecdote Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 29 wordsI think it is important for us to make sure we understand that, as Members, we want to mentor and help our young people move on and move up. Anecdote · 49 wordsI have to say that in that 40 years, I have seen people who fell into this situation, frequently women, where there were accusations or sexual harassment taking place or sexual relationships taking place. Some of my personal friends were forced out of their jobs in 1987 and 1988.6Anecdote Claims · 23 wordsWe didn’t have the types of protections then that we do now. In fact, Congress explicitly exempted itself from these sorts of restrictions.7 Reasoning · 35 wordsWe have to make sure that now that they are in place, we use them to the fullest extent because those people, primarily women, it was damaging to their careers, and it stays with them. Claims · 6 wordsThat was before the internet age. Reasoning · 31 wordsThese women today, in this instance, that is not good mentoring. This is something that could follow them for the rest of their careers, and it won’t be beneficial to them. The ask · 34 wordsLet’s make sure, as we work through this with our staff, that we don’t do things that actually injure our staffers who are doing good work for us and trying to make a difference. Procedure · 14 wordsOne other point I want to make, and this is directly to the staffers.Procedure Anecdote · 135 wordsI had a chance to speak to a group, just coincidentally, during that week of the Gonzales and Swalwell resignations. It was a group of young people, mainly interns but not solely. Some of them were young people here on the Hill in their late teens and early twenties. I asked them: How many of you heard about the resignations of Mr. Swalwell and Mr. Gonzales? There were about 40 of them in the room.8 Every hand went up. I asked them then: How many of you know that we have an entity here, the Office of Employee Advocacy, that you can turn to and get assistance if you find yourself in that situation? Only two hands went up.9 I talked to them and encouraged them about reaching out to this sort of professional assistance.Anecdote Claims · 10 wordsIt is a confidential attorney-client relationship.10 It makes a difference. The ask · 90 wordsInstead of them trying to parse out at age 19 or 20 or 22 or 25 the best way to proceed, get the sort of legal guidance to help you make it through there. We have to do a better job of making sure that when that question is posed, not just 2 hands go up, Vague promisebut all 40 hands go up, so that when young men and women, especially women, find themselves in these kinds of situations, they don’t have to try and figure out how to go forward. Reasoning · 41 wordsThey don’t have to go to the staff director, as what happened here, and get whatever guidance they might get, recognizing that the staff directors were in a precarious situation, too, when you have a Member committing this kind of misconduct. The ask · 10 wordsLet’s make sure that they have that type of assistance. Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 34 wordsthe last point I will make on this, and this is in the wake of some of the other--not investigations before the committee right now, but some of the other things we have heard.Procedure Reasoning · 38 wordsThere are going to come times when we need to go outside of the House of Representatives and refer these cases to law enforcement because some of the sexual misconduct isn’t just sexual harassment. It is sexual assault. The ask · 15 wordsTo the colleagues listening out there right now, don’t do anything to approach these lines. Claims · 24 wordsThey know that this is over the line. He knows this was over the line, and he knew it when he was doing it. The ask · 26 wordsLet’s make sure that we stop it in its tracks and give these young people, young women in particular, the type of assistance that they need.Vague promise

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