Analysis · Floor speech · beta

J. Luis Correa

118 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Greeting 25%Claims 34%Thanks 17%The ask 25%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 29 wordsI rise today to honor the life and legacy of my very good friend, Chief John Welter, the 32nd police chief of my hometown, the city of Anaheim, California.1Greeting Claims · 40 wordsChief Welter made many contributions to the good people of Anaheim, including the creation of the department’s first-ever chief advisory council.2 He also established the John Welter Family Justice Center to help those in need in the city of Anaheim.3 Thanks · 20 wordsI also extend my deepest condolences to his spouse, Terri, and the whole Welter family in this very difficult time.Thanks The ask · 29 wordsI ask my colleagues today to join me in honoring John Welter’s legacy of leadership, service, and his commitment to protecting the city of Anaheim that we call home.

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