Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

John W. Hickenlooper

338 words · 15 sentences · 21 clauses

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Average 94 / 100
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The ask 15%Claims 63%Reasoning 12%Promise 9%

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Mr. President, The ask · 17 wordsI ask unanimous consent for the Senate to pass S. 1838, the DeOndra Dixon INCLUDE Project Act. Claims · 173 wordsThousands of Americans live with Down syndrome, and yet research has been underfunded for decades.Hidden agency In 2017, Congress encouraged the National Institutes of Health, the NIH, to launch the INCLUDE Project--an effort to make groundbreaking discoveries about conditions that disproportionately affect people with Down syndrome, like Alzheimer’s disease.1 The INCLUDE Project brings together multiple NIH institutes under a coordinated approach that is already delivering significant scientific discoveries as well as new treatments. The bipartisan, bicameral DeOndra Dixon INCLUDE Project Act will officially authorize the INCLUDE Project into law.2 The bill will ensure that Congress and the American people have visibility into the scientific breakthroughs that are so needed for this community. The INCLUDE Project is already yielding significant scientific results, and Colorado is at the core of these scientific advances. Today, Colorado is proudly home to the world’s leading Down syndrome advocacy, research, 3and medical care partners at the Global Down Syndrome Foundation, the Linda Crnic Institute for Down Syndrome, the Alzheimer’s and Cognition Center, and the Sie Center at Children’s Hospital Colorado. Reasoning · 42 wordsWe need to make sure that improving health outcomes for individuals with Down syndrome remains a priority and do so in honor of DeOndra Dixon, an extraordinary person who was an advocate leaving a legacy that will help improve lives for generations.Vague promise Claims · 39 wordsThis bill has support on both sides of the aisle, including Senators Jerry Moran and Cory Booker and Representatives Diana DeGette and Richard Hudson.4 We also thank Senators Bennet, Padilla, Capito, Coons, Van Hollen, 5and Ossoff for their support. Promise · 32 wordsWe are determined to get this bill across the finish line for DeOndra and for the thousands of Americans who will see their lives improve for the better by this critical research. Mr. President, The ask · 35 wordsas if in legislative session and notwithstanding rule XXII, I ask unanimous consent that the Committee on Health, Education, Labor, and Pensions be discharged and the Senate proceed to the immediate consideration of S. 1838.

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