Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Young Kim

154 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 29%Procedure 1%Positioning 60%Reasoning 8%The ask 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordsover 80 percent of Americans believe Members of Congress shouldn’t be trading stocks and benefiting off insider information.1 Procedure · 1 wordsYet, ProcedureClaims · 27 wordswhile Americans have made their position clear, some Members of Congress and their families made more than 13,000 stock trades worth more than $600 million last year.2 Positioning · 92 wordsAmericans deserve to know they have honest representation that puts their interests first in Washington, not career politicians looking to get rich. That is why I am proud to rise in strong support of this Stop Insider Trading Act to restore trust in Congress and bring accountability that the American people are asking for. Congress is not a VIP club for lifelong insiders to enrich themselves. We are here to serve the American people, and the American people have given us a clear mandate.Unearned certainty This is not partisan. It is not controversial.Positioning Reasoning · 12 wordsStopping insider trading should be the easiest decision we make this week. The ask · 4 wordsLet’s get this done.

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