Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Mark Alford

461 words · 31 sentences · 39 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 4%Reasoning 25%Claims 32%Procedure 4%The ask 6%Anecdote 27%Positioning 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordsI thank Chairman Steil for his dedicated hard work on getting this bill to the floor. It wasn’t easy.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 13 wordspublic service is a privilege. It is not a pathway to personal profit. Claims · 25 wordsYet, too many Americans look at us here in Congress and wonder if that line has been blurred, not proven, not assumed, but simply questioned. Reasoning · 6 wordsThat question alone is a problem. Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 22 wordsthat is because when lawmakers consistently outperform Wall Street, then people start asking questions. They start doubting. They stop trusting in us. Claims · 38 wordsFor example, Mr. Speaker, there is even a Member here in our body who entered Congress years ago with a net worth in the thousands, and yet now has a net worth of well more than $200 million.1 Reasoning · 8 wordsThat is exactly why this matters, Mr. Speaker. Procedure · 10 wordsWhen I came to Congress, I made it quite clear: ProcedureReasoning · 16 wordsWe should not be trading individual stocks while we are making decisions that shape our economy. Claims · 83 wordsThat is why I introduced the PELOSI Act to draw a bright, unmistakable line, no stock trading, no gray area, 2and no doubt, to be above the appearance of impropriety as Chairman Steil said. The very legislation we are debating today from my friend, Chairman Steil, advances that same principle. It says that if you have the privilege of serving in this body and serving your constituents, Mr. Speaker, then you don’t get to personally profit from the markets that you help influence. Procedure · 3 wordsThis isn’t complicated.Procedure Reasoning · 27 wordsThe American people shouldn’t have to wonder if their Representative is working for them or watching their stock portfolio on their phones here on the House Chamber. The ask · 26 wordsLet’s remove that doubt. Let’s restore trust to this body.Vague promise Let’s raise the standard of each and every one of us here in this body today.Vague promise Anecdote · 55 wordsIf I wanted to, I could have made a lot of money in the last 3\1/2\ years I was here trading stock and probably would be able to afford an apartment somewhere in D.C.4 However, I don’t, and like a lot of Members who don’t trade stocks, I sleep on my couch in my office.Anecdote Procedure · 6 wordsDo you know what, Mr. Speaker?Procedure Anecdote · 3 wordsI sleep well.Anecdote Positioning · 11 wordsI sleep well knowing that I am doing the right thing.Positioning Anecdote · 67 wordsIn closing, I grew up in the Church of Christ down in Baytown, Texas.3 I worked for a while in West Palm Beach. There was a preacher there named Dan Jenkins who used to say all the time: It is always right to do right. It is always wrong to do wrong. It is never right to do wrong, and it is never wrong to do right.AnecdoteOff point Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 23 wordsthis bill is the right thing to do, not just for the American people, but for our body to restore trust to us.

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