Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Mark Pocan

185 words · 13 sentences · 14 clauses

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Average 89 / 100
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Claims 59%Positioning 22%Aside 14%The ask 4%

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Claims · 81 wordsAs a Member of Congress, I don’t own any individual stocks because, as a byproduct of my job, I get inside information on many publicly traded companies.1 We don’t let people with insider information buy stock because it impacts markets and threatens public trust in a system that so many of our retirement dollars are in. However, this bill before us puts Members of Congress above the law. It is not a real congressional stock trading ban like other bipartisan measures. Positioning · 5 wordsThis is a weak alternative.Positioning Aside · 26 wordsIt is like Velveeta to real Wisconsin cheese. It has been said that this bill has loopholes so big a Qatari jet could go through them.AsideHidden agency Claims · 29 wordsIt still allows Members to hold stock.2 It still allows Members to buy stocks with dividends.3 It still allows family members to buy stocks for others for any reason.4 Positioning · 36 wordsIt is basically the opposite of a real stock trading ban for Members of Congress, a wolf in sheep’s clothing. This bill continues the corruption of what marks too much of what is done in Washington.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsplease don’t support this Velveeta and weak bill.

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