The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity. Reasoning rests on 2 conclusions, too few to hold the grade down.
Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 59%Positioning 22%Aside 14%The ask 4%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Claims · 81 wordsAs a Member of Congress, I don’t own any individual stocks because, as a byproduct of my job, I get inside information on many publicly traded companies.1We don’t let people with insider information buy stock because it impacts markets and threatens public trust in a system that so many of our retirement dollars are in.However, this bill before us puts Members of Congress above the law.It is not a real congressional stock trading ban like other bipartisan measures.Positioning · 5 wordsThis is a weak alternative.PositioningAside · 26 wordsIt is like Velveeta to real Wisconsin cheese.It has been said that this bill has loopholes so big a Qatari jet could go through them.AsideHidden agencyClaims · 29 wordsIt still allows Members to hold stock.2It still allows Members to buy stocks with dividends.3It still allows family members to buy stocks for others for any reason.4Positioning · 36 wordsIt is basically the opposite of a real stock trading ban for Members of Congress, a wolf in sheep’s clothing.This bill continues the corruption of what marks too much of what is done in Washington.PositioningMr. Speaker, The ask · 8 wordsplease don’t support this Velveeta and weak bill.