Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Gilbert Ray Cisneros, Jr.

150 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 10%Reasoning 34%Claims 25%Positioning 25%The ask 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Procedure · 6 wordsI appreciate my colleague’s argument there, ProcedureReasoning · 22 wordsbut if the Department of Defense can’t maintain the cybersecurity cameras on our own installations, then we have a lot bigger problems. Claims · 17 wordsThe truth is that vehicle accidents are one of the leading causes of death for our servicemembers.1Unearned certainty Positioning · 38 wordsWhy are we even debating this? We should be debating amendments that rein in this administration’s reckless conduct on this Iran war or its reckless spending in the Middle East. Instead, my colleagues would rather discuss speed cameras.PositioningOff point Claims · 20 wordsThe fact is, this amendment restrains the Secretary’s ability to allocate security and law enforcement resources to address traffic safety.2Unearned certainty Reasoning · 29 wordsProhibiting the use of speed cameras also undermines an installation commander’s ability to deploy the appropriate resources to effectively meet the traffic and public safety needs of the installation. Mr. Chair, The ask · 9 wordsI urge my colleagues to oppose this reckless amendment, Procedure · 9 wordsand I yield back the balance of my time.Procedure

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