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Pat Harrigan

141 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 86 / 100
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Greeting 8%Claims 60%Reasoning 18%The ask 9%Procedure 6%

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Mr. Chair, Greeting · 11 wordsI appreciate my colleague from California’s concern about overall base safety.Greeting Claims · 85 wordsI think if we step back and actually look at the big picture here, what we are talking about is simply a tax on our lower enlisted personnel. We have military police to enforce safety standards that are already issued by the base commanders across every installation that we have. At the end of the day, we cannot deny that NIPRNet has been compromised by over 90 percent of our most serious and significant adversaries--the exact same net that these speed cameras would live on.1Unearned certainty Reasoning · 25 wordsI think that is a significant concern for the safety and security of our installation personnel and the operations that are ongoing on our installations. The ask · 12 wordsFor that reason, I encourage my colleagues to strongly support this amendment. Mr. Chair, Procedure · 8 wordsI yield back the balance of my time.Procedure

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