Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Gilbert Ray Cisneros, Jr.

241 words · 16 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 9%Positioning 7%The ask 3%Claims 39%Reasoning 42%

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Mr. Chair, Procedure · 5 wordsI yield myself 1\1/2\ minutes.Procedure Mr. Chair, Positioning · 17 wordsI am going to say, I am pretty baffled by this amendment from my friend and colleague, PositioningThe ask · 8 wordsand I rise in opposition to this amendment. Claims · 27 wordsIt moves base safety in the wrong direction. Even the Department of Defense opposes this amendment.1 This amendment would prohibit automated speed enforcement cameras on military installations.2 Reasoning · 68 wordsTo be clear, these cameras aren’t about punishing our troops or their families. They exist to keep bases and military families safe. These cameras keep reckless drivers accountable and have a proven and effective record for reducing traffic accidents and maintaining safe and orderly driving.Unearned certainty According to the Federal Highway Administration, speed enforcement cameras have been found to reduce roadway fatalities and injuries by up to 37 percent.3 Claims · 46 wordsI want to remind my colleagues that our military bases aren’t just for troops to work and train. They are home to schools, youth centers, child development centers, playgrounds, and family housing. Junior personnel can’t usually afford vehicles and are usually having to walk around bases. Reasoning · 34 wordsIt is imperative that we maintain traffic safety. The servicemembers and families who live and work on these bases deserve every protection we can give them, and that must be part of this conversation. Claims · 20 wordsI have not heard one shred of data and not one credible argument that this amendment makes our installations safer. Mr. Chair, Procedure · 16 wordsI urge my colleagues to oppose this amendment, and I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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