Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Gilbert Ray Cisneros, Jr.

148 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 94 / 100
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Positioning 5%Claims 64%Reasoning 18%The ask 8%Procedure 5%

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Mr. Chair, Positioning · 8 wordsI rise in strong opposition to this amendment.Positioning Claims · 94 wordsThis amendment bans gender-affirming care for servicemembers and their dependents under TRICARE.1 Recently, the Secretary of Defense just came out in support of gender-affirming care for our male servicemembers by providing the testosterone testing and treatment for those who need it.2 The DOD Secretary and Republicans have already canceled health coverage for less than 1 percent of the population within the Department of Defense.3 The Secretary is currently kicking out transgender servicemembers, 4and now this cruel amendment is targeting dependents of servicemembers who are receiving hormone therapy and mental health counseling for gender dysphoria.5 Reasoning · 27 wordsDependents not receiving adequate healthcare is a factor pushing people to separate from the military. This culture war ideology amendment can result in a readiness gap issue. The ask · 12 wordsI strongly oppose this amendment and urge my colleagues to vote ``no.’’ Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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