Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Alan Armstrong

639 words · 19 sentences · 33 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 95 / 100
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Thanks 2%Anecdote 9%Reasoning 68%Claims 13%The ask 4%Procedure 4%

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Thanks · 14 wordsThank you, Senator Curtis, and it was truly a joy to travel with you.Thanks Anecdote · 52 wordsThis was not luxurious travel. We were getting tired of each other’s odor by the time we got done with this trip. And we were pretty confined to the same van for a long period of time. But it was very impressive on us, I think, the images that we took away.Anecdote Reasoning · 210 wordsI think, you know, a lot of times, we think about things and everything here, and I think the questions we have here in the United States about, man, we have our own issues, we have our own budgetary issues, and we have our own fiscal issues that we need to deal with here--and all of those are very true, and all of those are very valid questions for Americans to be asking, including myself. But when you realize what is actually going on there on the ground; you realize the spirit of these people that did nothing wrong, that were minding their own business and had their own country attacked, had a democracy that they valued, that they cherished and had that attempted to be run over the top of; and you realize what is the difference--the reason they have been able to surprise everybody on the field is the spirit that they have and the belief that people like ourselves, people that believe in democracies, are going to be there to help and support them. Well, I tell you what, they have surprised us all because of their passion, their belief in democracy, and what they know to be true versus what they are being told by Russians. Claims · 53 wordsSo it is impossible--that is the second time I have gotten to go to Ukraine--it is impossible to miss the spirit of these people and how badly they want to defend their own democracy and not be told somebody else’s version of the world but their own open, free perspective of the world.1 Reasoning · 31 wordsBut despite that issue, there are also some very important things that we as the United States should be taking from this, and we have a great opportunity to do so. Claims · 28 wordsThis war is different than any war that has been before us. This is modern warfare with AI involved in it, with very low-cost weaponry involved in it, Reasoning · 153 wordsand I think a display that we had better pay attention to of very--in the business world that I come from, we would call this continuous improvement on steroids. This is every day a feedback loop right back into their drone development systems every day about how to get better, how to improve their communication with their drones, and they have done a remarkable job. If you think about the static approach that we have today to war and defense and how long it takes us to develop and to acquire our acquisition systems, that is no match for a group of people that have the spirit that they do and for a continuous improvement process that is being developed. They are giving us the opportunity to experience that without having to put our lives on the line, and we better take advantage and we better be listening and learning from their experience. The ask · 23 wordsWe better take seriously an opportunity that we have to help our allies to defend democracy in a place that desperately wants it. Reasoning · 42 wordsThis isn’t a matter of us not knowing what things will be like after we leave; this is an area that has a democracy, a stable democracy, and we need to be there to support it and show how much we care. Procedure · 25 wordsI have about 10 pounds of potatoes here for a 5-pound bag, but I am going to turn it back to Senator Tillis as well.Procedure Anecdote · 8 wordsSo a lot of great observations we had.Anecdote

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