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Martin Heinrich

257 words · 18 sentences · 22 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
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Procedure 8%Claims 34%Reasoning 25%Positioning 15%The ask 18%

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Mr. President, Procedure · 12 wordsI rise in opposition to the motion to proceed to H.R. 9340.Procedure Claims · 35 wordsElectricity demand, as we all know, is growing, driven in large part by hyperscalers and data centers.1Unearned certainty Tech companies have promised to pay their fair share and not make American households pay the extra costs, Reasoning · 44 wordsbut it is not enough to take their word for it, and it is not enough to merely tell States to consider--consider--making utilities charge data centers for all of the costs associated with the generation, additional transmission, and distribution upgrades necessary to serve them. Claims · 39 wordsStates are already taking action. According to the Smart Electric Power Alliance, more than 30 States have adopted specific retail rate structures for large loads like data centers.2 H.R. 9340 simply does not protect Americans from high utility bills. Procedure · 4 wordsLet me be clear.Procedure Claims · 14 wordsThis bill has no--zero--requirement that data centers actually pay for their own grid upgrades.3 Positioning · 25 wordsH.R. 9340 might make some Members of the Senate feel good about voting on a bill that sounds like it does something about data centers.Positioning Procedure · 4 wordsLet me be clear.Procedure Positioning · 14 wordsThis is nothing more than a messaging bill on the eve of an election.PositioningNo reason given The ask · 18 wordsRather than voluntary pledges or vague suggestions to States, Congress needs to pass a law with real teeth. Reasoning · 19 wordsIf voluntary pledges and suggestions worked, families and small businesses wouldn’t already be staring down rate hikes right now. The ask · 29 wordsSo let’s require data centers to pay for their incremental costs and prohibit by law passing those costs on to consumers. I would urge my colleagues to vote no.

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