Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Jim Banks

266 words · 15 sentences · 23 clauses

Statement grade
B–
72 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 28%Claims 23%Anecdote 28%Reasoning 13%The ask 8%

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Madam President, Procedure · 52 wordsin a few moments, I am going to ask for unanimous consent for my resolution to designate the month of September as Dystonia Awareness Month. But before I do, I want to speak a little bit about dystonia, what it is, and how personal the disease is for me and my family.Procedure Claims · 49 wordsDystonia is a neurological movement disorder that affects nearly 250,000 Americans.1 It causes involuntary muscle contractions and repetitive movements. These contractions can affect any part of the body, and they can be very painful. Dystonia affects people of almost any age, and it may develop without any clear cause. Anecdote · 74 wordsMy mom has suffered from dystonia for nearly 40 years, and I have seen firsthand how difficult the disease can be on anyone who has it. But my mom, with the help of good friends and family and some really good doctors, has never let dystonia hold her back from being a great mom, a great grandma, and from someone who goes out and lives her everyday life in the way that she has.Anecdote Claims · 12 wordsDystonia is often misdiagnosed, and there is no cure for it yet. Reasoning · 34 wordsThat is why it is so important to raise awareness about dystonia, what it is, and what it causes. Greater awareness leads to better research and eventually better treatments and hopefully even a cure.No reason given The ask · 22 wordsI urge all of my colleagues to support this simple resolution and draw attention to this painful disease that affects so many. Madam President, Procedure · 23 wordsand, with that, I ask unanimous consent that the Senate proceed to the consideration of S.2 Res. 917, which was submitted earlier today.Procedure

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