Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Andy Kim

644 words · 27 sentences · 37 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
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Thanks 6%The ask 7%Reasoning 36%Claims 28%Anecdote 19%Positioning 1%Promise 2%Procedure 1%

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Madam President, Thanks · 9 wordsI thank my colleagues Senator Warner and Senator Schatz.Thanks The ask · 45 wordsThis is really an invitation to all of our colleagues to be able to join us in this moment because this is a call from the American people to address their worries, to avoid disaster, and to give them a sense of stability and predictability. Reasoning · 119 wordsYes, this effort we are putting forward today is not going to fix all of the problems; it is not going to avoid all of the pitfalls, but it is a start, and that is what the American people are looking for. They are looking for a start. They are looking for action that we are taking not just in words but in recognizing, yes, innovation without control just leads to chaos and leads to unpredictability. That is something that we need to make sure we are meeting at this moment to ensure that the American people have control over the incredible strides that we are seeing on AI. Now, control can’t be built on faith and half measures. Claims · 36 wordsJust yesterday, we saw again OpenAI saying that they are not going to release their newest model Astra because of security concerns.1 We have seen other major labs take some steps to mitigate. That is progress, Reasoning · 28 wordsbut the stakes are too high for this to be just voluntary that big corporations take the right action just because it is the right thing to do. Anecdote · 121 wordsWhen I was working in national security, the starting point of every conversation was, ``What is the magnitude of the problem that we are facing?’’ and then to be able to work backward from there to understand what the magnitude is of the solution needed to actually address that problem. Well, when I did a townhall 2 weeks ago, I had a constituent come up and ask me--because I was talking about the Hugging Face incident or some of the other news that we had seen of rogue AI agents breaking out.2 This one constituent asked me, he said: Well, how many times has this happened? How many times? Are we documenting it? How many times have we actually seen this?Anecdote Claims · 94 wordsLook, the answer that I had to give, truthfully, was that we didn’t know. Even still, today, we are standing here on the floor of the Senate, and we don’t know how many of these types of instances have happened. I will be honest with you, I don’t think the top AI companies fully know the total number of incidents and other challenges that they have faced. So when they have the question: What is the magnitude of the problem we are trying to solve, the answer right now is that we don’t know. Positioning · 6 wordsThat is scary, that is worrisome, PositioningPromise · 14 wordsand that is something we should work incredibly hard to be able to address. Reasoning · 19 wordsDo we know just how much the move toward full recursive self- improvement is going to magnify these problems? Claims · 50 wordsWe don’t know yet, which is why we are trying to set out, with the effort today, to recognize that the stakes are too high and that control comes from creating efforts like an AI safety board or in establishing more secure sandboxes for testing and other types of standards. Reasoning · 18 wordsControl is necessary because we need to ensure that the technology does not outpace safety and common sense. Thanks · 27 wordsI am grateful, again, to be working with my colleagues here and, again, to be, hopefully, working with all of our colleagues together on this shared agenda.ThanksVague promise Reasoning · 49 wordsThat is what the American people are not just asking of us but are demanding of us to be able to do so that this bill can be part of a comprehensive approach that will help us maintain control and avoid the chaos that no American wants to see. Procedure · 9 wordsWith that, I yield to the Senator from Virginia.Procedure

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