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John Kennedy

249 words · 27 sentences · 31 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
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Claims 69%Thanks 8%Positioning 9%Aside 8%The ask 6%

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Mr. President, Claims · 27 wordsthere was a time early on in this process that I truly believed this bill was dead as disco, but I think it is going to pass, Thanks · 12 wordsand that is a tribute to a lot of people’s hard work.Thanks Claims · 68 wordsNow, we have made a lot of people happy with this bill. We have certainly made the colleges happy. We have made the universities happy. We have made their athletic programs happy. We have made their donors happy. We have certainly made the coaches happy. And we have made the players happy, to the extent that this will provide stability. I guess we have made everybody happy--not exactly. Positioning · 14 wordsWho makes this possible? Who makes college athletics possible? Who generates all this cashflow?Positioning Claims · 56 wordsThe fans. The fans. And we have done nothing for them.No reason given Zero. Zilch. Nada. And their ticket prices keep going up. And every single one of us in this body has been out there all across America talking about affordability. Yet in some cases, the prices have gone up--go up 30 and 35 percent a year.1 Aside · 19 wordsMy amendment--before you cut me off, Mr. President, I have talked slowly, and I ought to get extra time.Aside Claims · 21 wordsMy amendment would prohibit any institution, conference, or intercollegiate athletic association from raising ticket prices by more than 4 percent annually.2 The ask · 16 wordsLet us do something for the fans. Let us do something for affordability for a change. Positioning · 9 wordsLet us put our money where our mouth is.Positioning Thanks · 7 wordsThank you for your indulgence, Mr. President.Thanks

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