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Madam President, Greeting · 15 wordsit is my honor to rise today and give somebody gratitude for my first and, GreetingThanks · 8 wordsso far, only chief of staff, Mark Libell.Thanks Claims · 26 wordsMark was with me from my first days in the Senate. I have spent my entire adult life in ministry.1 This was my first public office. Anecdote · 39 wordsSo as I made my way to the Senate, I knew that I needed someone who knew his way around here--you can relate--someone who knew where the bathrooms were and who knew how to get things done around here.Anecdote Claims · 31 wordsMark was a Senate veteran and well respected by everyone who knew him, and it didn’t take me long to understand why. He came to DC as an intern in 2003, 2Anecdote · 39 wordsand he decided he would intern until he found a job or ran out of money. He clearly was hooked. And if he ran out of money, he planned to pack up his car and return home to Alabama.Anecdote Claims · 97 wordsWell, luckily for all of us, Mark did not stay an intern for long. He went on to work for my friend Senator Debbie Stabenow, Representatives Bart Gordon and Linda Sanchez, 3and Senator Jay Rockefeller.4 After 10 years working on Capitol Hill, Mark took his talents to the Federal Reserve Board but returned to the Senate a few years later to serve his beloved home State of Alabama as deputy chief of staff and legislative director for my friend Senator Doug Jones.56 So when I say Mark knows the Senate, I mean he really knows the Senate. Anecdote · 25 wordsAlthough he hails from Alabama and everybody knows how serious that rivalry is between Georgia and Alabama football, we have never held that against him.Anecdote Claims · 432 wordsHe has seen this place from every angle, he has done just about every job there is to do in a Senator’s office, and he has been a major asset to my mission and my work. That is part of what makes Mark so special, because he saw so many roles. He sees himself in every staffer. He has a deep respect in every role that a person plays in a Senate office no matter their title. Staff assistants and senior staff alike know that Mark’s door is always open. He will make time to offer career advice or to solve a problem. And when staffers walk out of his office, they feel respected, and they feel heard. Most importantly, they feel like someone is in their corner rooting for them to succeed. And on more than one occasion, he has been a confidante and trusted counsel to me. Mark has the heart of a public servant. He wrote his thesis on Bobby Kennedy. Even in a place as cynical as Washington, DC, Mark is leaving the Senate as much of an idealist as when he arrived over two decades ago. He has always believed in this institution’s ability to make a difference in people’s lives, and that is why Mark fought for me to keep on the entire casework team from my Republican predecessor and friend, the late Senator Johnny Isakson.7 That casework team that Mark advocated for has gone on to help nearly 68,000 constituents and is nationally recognized as one of the best casework teams in Congress.8 They get great things done for Georgians all the time. Because my name is on the door, I get the credit, but they do the work under Mark’s leadership. Mark believed that we could cut child poverty in half, and he helped me to do that when we passed the expanded child tax credit.9No reason given He believed we could ban private equity from mass-purchasing homes, and we did just that.10 He believed that we could come together and lower the cost of insulin, and we did just that.11 But what I most appreciate about Mark is that he always believes in this country’s ability to do better, to be better. That idealism he saw in Bobby Kennedy is very much alive in him. Mark believed in a country where a State in the old Confederacy could elect its first African-American Senator and first Jewish Senator in one fell swoop and where a kid from Florence, AL, could go on to become one of the most influential staffers serving today in the U.S. Senate.12 Thanks · 47 wordsBecause no one achieves anything alone, I would also like to thank Mark’s wonderful wife Carrie for the support she has shown to Mark and my entire operation through early mornings and late nights. I would also like to thank his mother Lynn and his brother Adam.Thanks Claims · 70 wordsI know his father, who about a year ago passed into the light, smiles from someplace in eternity.13 While Mark may be leaving the Senate tomorrow, he leaves behind dozens of staffers whom he has inspired with his patriotic idealism that a career in public service is worth it, is worth the sacrifice, that the small wins add up, that they make the difference in the lives of ordinary people, 14Reasoning · 15 wordsand that our future is brighter when we choose to have faith in one another. Thanks · 33 wordsSo, Mark, from me, from my staff, and from the people of Georgia, thank you so very much. God bless you and your future endeavors. Keep the faith, and keep looking up. (Applause.)Thanks

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