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Madam President, Greeting · 32 wordsI rise today to congratulate Rear Admiral Jennifer S.Courture on her retirement from the U.S. Navy and to honor her for more than 31 years of distinguished service to our Nation.1GreetingPositioning · 18 wordsThroughout her extraordinary career, Rear Admiral Couture has exemplified the highest ideals of leadership, professionalism, and public service.PositioningClaims · 112 wordsA native of Vineland, NJ, who spent much of her naval career in Virginia, she was commissioned through the Naval Reserve Officers Training Corps program at George Washington University in 1995 and went on to serve with distinction across multiple sea, shore, 2and flag assignments.At sea, Rear Admiral Couture served aboard USS Wasp, USS Saipan, USS Elrod, USS Leyte Gulf, 3and USS Porter.4She commanded USS Kauffman and Destroyer Squadron 28, deploying twice as Sea Combat Commander with the Harry S.5Truman Carrier Strike Group, one of the few women to command a carrier strike group in Navy history, highlighting her role as a trailblazer for women in the armed forces.Positioning · 17 wordsHer leadership style has focused on empowering sailors and fostering a culture of excellence within her command.PositioningClaims · 141 wordsHer operational service included support for Operations Joint Endeavor, Active Endeavor, Iraqi Freedom, Enduring Freedom, 6and Inherent Resolve.7Ashore, she held key leadership and policy roles that strengthened the Navy’s people, readiness, and operational effectiveness, including service with Commander, U.S. Atlantic Fleet; Naval Surface Force Atlantic; U.S. Joint Forces Command; the Center for a New American Security; and the Office of the Chief of Naval Personnel.Furthermore, Rear Admiral Couture completed studies at the U.S. Naval War College and the Joint Forces Staff College and earned a master of arts degree from Old Dominion University and a doctor of education in Organizational leadership from Northeastern University.8As a flag officer, Rear Admiral Couture continued to lead at the highest levels, serving as Commander, Naval Service Training Command; Commander, Carrier Strike Group Eleven; and Director, Military Personnel Plans and Policy, OPNAV N13.Positioning · 40 wordsIn each role, she advanced the development, readiness, and success of sailors and naval forces entrusted to her leadership.Rear Admiral Couture’s career reflects a sustained commitment to mission, mentorship, innovation, and the people who make the U.S. Navy strong.PositioningClaims · 31 wordsHer accomplishments--including numerous personal, unit, 9and service awards, among them the Legion of Merit--stand as a testament to her devotion to country and to the sailors she has led and inspired.Greeting · 31 wordsAs she concludes more than three decades of honorable service, I congratulate her on an exceptional naval career and wish her and her family fair winds and following seas in retirement.Greeting