Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Angela D. Alsobrooks

316 words · 15 sentences · 18 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Thanks 5%Positioning 46%Claims 35%Promise 14%

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Mr. President, Thanks · 16 wordsI would like to thank my colleague from Virginia for his leadership on this critical bill.Thanks Positioning · 46 wordsBoth Maryland and Virginia have uniquely felt the pain from this administration’s effort to attack Federal workers. They are our constituents, patriots who serve this country no matter the party; people who have been disrespected over and over again by efforts to weaken their collective power.Positioning Claims · 35 wordsThis administration has spent all of this time driving up the cost of everything from gas to groceries, starting wars that we are paying for at home, making healthcare unaffordable and making our lives worse.Off point Positioning · 78 wordsBut what is the real threat in their eyes? Our patriot civil servants, patriotic civil servants. It is a cruel lie meant to cause division and distract the American people from the awful things the Republicans are doing.Off point The fact is, President Trump and Russell Vought are afraid of the collective power of these workers. They are afraid that Federal workers’ ability to fight back through collective bargaining will keep them from bending the government to their will.Positioning Claims · 59 wordsPresident Trump stripped Federal workers of their hard-won collective bargaining rights, one of the most significant acts of union busting in our Nation’s history, all in the name of national security.1 Since then, he started a war in Iran with no exit strategy, bombed eight countries, 23and awarded billions of dollars in defense contracts to his sons and cronies.Off point Positioning · 22 wordsThe real threat to our national security is not our dedicated civil servants; it is this corrupt President and his reckless administration.PositioningOff point Promise · 26 wordsTogether my colleagues and I are instead laser-focused on protecting these patriotic Federal workers on fighting back against efforts to erode their rights in the workplace.Vague promise Claims · 16 wordsAnd this is personal for me and for the 460,000 Marylanders who serve the Federal Government.4 Promise · 18 wordsWe will not stop fighting until the Protect America’s Workforce Act is passed and our rights are restored.

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