The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning and Clarity. Reasoning rests on 2 conclusions, too few to hold the grade down.
Average 94 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
The ask 20%Claims 62%Reasoning 10%Thanks 7%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. President, The ask · 25 wordsI rise today to ask my colleagues to support the passage of my New Mexico Land Grant-Mercedes Historical or Traditional Use Cooperation and Coordination Act.Claims · 81 wordsLand grant communities in New Mexico have cared for our lands, sustained our communities, and preserved our traditions that are deeply rooted in our State’s history and culture.But for too long these communities have faced unnecessary barriers when working with the Federal Government.My legislation is simple.It strengthens cooperation and coordination between land grant-merced communities and the Federal Government.It provides much needed clarity on Federal processes and ensures that historical and traditional uses are considered in Federal planning.Reasoning · 30 wordsThis is about making sure the people who have cared for these lands for generations have a voice in the decisions that affect our communities, our livelihoods, and our traditions.Claims · 83 wordsThis legislation has been years in the making and has earned bipartisan, bicameral support.It was among the last bills I passed as a Member of the U.S. House of Representatives in December of 2020.1It then passed the Senate in December 2022.2In December of last year, it was reported unanimously out of the Senate Committee on Energy and Natural Resources.3The U.S. Forest Service and Bureau of Land Management have provided testimony in support of this legislation at recent committee hearings, 4Thanks · 23 wordsand I am proud to have worked alongside New Mexico’s land grant communities and the New Mexico Land Grant Council on this effort.ThanksClaims · 28 wordsThis legislation recognizes the important role that land grant-merced communities have played in New Mexico for hundreds of years and helps preserve the connection for generations to come.Vague promiseThe ask · 17 wordsI urge my colleagues to once again support this legislation so we can finally get this done.Mr. President, The ask · 21 wordsnotwithstanding rule XXII, I ask unanimous consent that the Senate proceed to the immediate consideration of Calendar No. 476, S.1363.5