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Michael Lawler

165 words · 8 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Thanks 45%Claims 55%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 52 wordsI rise today to honor the life of Howard Pierson, a beloved lifelong resident of Nyack, who passed away peacefully at the end of July at the age of 91.1 For decades, Howard was a cherished member of our community, dedicating his life to his faith, family, and inspiring those around him.Thanks Claims · 90 wordsA graduate of Tappan Zee High School, he earned 13 varsity letters in four sports before playing baseball at Manhattan College and signing with the Philadelphia Phillies.2 After serving in the United States Army, Howard returned home and spent more than three decades educating and mentoring young people in Rockland County.34 At Rockland Community College, he taught, coached, and served as athletic director for 15 years.5 His golf teams won 21 conference championships, 6and in 1980, Howard became the first African American to win the Metropolitan Golf Association’s Amateur Championship.7 Thanks · 18 wordsMy thoughts and prayers are with his wife, Dorothea; his family; and all who knew and loved him.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsmay he rest in peace.Thanks

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